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*on Domo Arigoto* Loved It!!! I'm off to read Happy-Smiley-Dib-Show! *sipping drink happily* Loves and cheers ~Lydia Marie~

I FINALLY got to finish this, as I only go on the net in school! O.O I'm going read the happy smiley Dib show now.

*blinks in utter awe*

Never in my life did I think that someone would combine the work of two of my idols (Sam Raimi and Lovecraft) with one of my favourite fandoms (Invader Zim). I LOVE THIS FREAKING STORY!!! Crikes, I was just waiting for Cthulu to come up through the floor of the hospital. And may I say, Dib slipping in the blood puddle was perfectly reminiscent of Ted Raimi slipping in the blood puddle in The Grudge? LOL, great work! And the BOOMSTICK! MUAHAHA!!!

And I really wasn't too sad to see Mary-Anne go. Aren't I a horrible person? LOL

Ok, I don't think anybody has ever gotten me to go that fangirly in a review before. You obviously have talent. *winks* :P

Florville

Holy DUDE!! The NEATNESS knows no bounds! Man. The betrayal of the Gaz, the dissection of the Mary-Anne (sweeeet), the sudden, random Zombie hoarde! All too damn GREAT for words!

And there was a line a couple chapters back that I will love forever and ever...

"You're so far back in the closet, you can see Narnia"

ROFLMAO!!

OH MY GOD.

that was completley insane. Gaz's death was so creepy, Zim is (was?) a complete freak. I love it. The hospital scenes where perfect, I could see the entire thing. Your writings amazing, this is going on my recomended list. Great work.

Well, I must say, the ending was violent and climactic. As for the NC-17 rating, the only thing that merited it was the violence. To be honest, this story could have had an R rating, as there was really nothing sexually explicit in the story at all.

Great use of lyrics, they added to the story in some places, but tended to distract a little towards the end. You obviously have great taste in music *winks*. This whole story was very well done; however, the tense changes in the last chapter were really distracting. Overall, I like your style and this is a great story. And now, I move on to your next work!

Florville

I apologise copiously for not reviewing earlier! I actually read this story ages ago when it was first posted and I loved it then, but at the time I wasn’t a member of the site. Anyway, now for the review!

First, Florville is entirely right with everything she’s said about this story. The humour is great and always witty, the writing style is charming, and the story itself is original. You write Zim so well, and Dib’s rants are perfect. Keep up the exceptional work.

Ah yes, so classy and ugly is the car of ZIM!

I love this story, and again, I love your writing style. And the comment about being so far back in the closet Dib can see Narnia was priceless. Had a good laugh over that one.

I honestly thought Zim was going to blow it for a minute there, I really wonder what he would have done to Mary-Anne...and it cracks me up how Gaz keeps beating the crap out of Zim. Perhaps one of these days the poor little Irken boy is gonna get a clue, but I doubt it...

Regards,
Florville

ROTFLMAO!!! I absolutely LOVE your dark, intelligent sense of humour! I've only just read the first chapter, and I have to review before I continue in order to do your story justice!! *applauds the RHPS reference* OMG, Dib in Frank-n-Furter's outfit would be WAY too cute. And Dib's fantasy is hot and disturbing at the same time. Great work on that one. And the John Wayne Gacy of science made me laugh so hard I scared the shit out of all four of my cats. ;) And he really is a closet case, isn't he? And what's the superhero thing about?

Oh, and could you please post the link to your other story? I don't frequent ff.net due to their closed-minded ignorance.

And now, I must continue to read your story, and I shall feedback again shortly!

Highest Regards,
Florville

Okay, second chapter and again ROTFLMAO. My favourite line had to be "bringing the hideous psychic pimple to a head of cerebral pus in her mind". A close second had to be Gaz asking Zim if he was just really butch for a female. *grins* The humour in this story is fantastic, I absolutely love it. And Zim's assertion of his male-ness and the earth-shattering waves of sound it produced were great...reminds me of "Door to Door"...And I hope I'm not offending by saying that "Mary-Anne" is far too close to "Mary Sue"...but the story about Dib's skeletal arm was quite interesting indeed. I obviously don't know if that was in your previous story yet, as I do not have a link...*cough*shameless laziness*cough*

I shall read on!