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for Shan-Yu's Victory

by lightbird

person harryhollow1
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!! I never read a mulan story like this before it is so amazing!! Is Shan-Yu going to fall in love with Mulan and Mulan the same to him!! please email me your next chapter update!!
person Bee
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay you need to write a sequel for this. Seriously, this is an awesome story and please please start the sequel because I am dying to find out what will happen next. I mean is Mulan still pregnant? She says she is moody and feeling nauseaus still, I mean maybe she was having twins and only miscarried one child? Wow, that would be such a twist……and will Shan Yu consolidate his power, will he find Mulan again, will he be a father?!? I mean I have a million questions and only YOUR sequel can satisfy my curiosity.
I really enjoyed this story and I can’t wait for you to continue this story. So please have pity on me and post again…soon…..
person Qzee
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is quite an extraordinary story. It so easily could have turned out this way in the movie and it reads as if it was something that actually happened at one time. Mulan's mixed feelings, the details of the palace, the details about all the other people - including your original characters of the doctor and the madam of the tavern house, all combine in a whole that reads as real, as something that happened. I'm glad I started reading it and after the first few paragraphs, I was captured and unable to stop reading until the end. Thank you for sharing it.
person Fanatical
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awe sum! Awe Sum!

You weave a compelling story!
person Kit
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, simply amazing, i cried at times. You have a brillant skill. email me when you update please
person Morelen
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I've read your story on ff.net and i was wondering if there's any difference between the two stories.
And Update! ^-^
I'm still in support of making this Shan-Yu/Mulan.
^-^
person Alisha
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter, I hope you continue to update this quickly. I am really enjoying your story, but I have to say I am at a loss at have it is going to end. I'm sure you won't disappoint us!
person Alisha
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am completely in love with this story!!! It has a great story line and is very well written. Please update as soon as you can!
person Jackie
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story indeed. I've re-read the chapters you have posted up and I must say I'm very excited to see the ending.

Disney cartoons are great to watch growing up, but it is always a depiction of black vs. white, and I like that you've depicted the story more in a realistic sense. It's given Shan-Yu alot more character depth.

I *Heart* Misunderstood romances. :)

Keep up on the good work, you have one faithful reader here.
person Fanatical
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I HAVE TO WRITE AGAIN!!

I LOVE CHAPTER 21. SHAN YU IS SO SEXY WHEN HE IS NOT FLEXING HIS MUSCLES. HIS USE OF HIS SWORD ON HIS COUSIN WAS AN AMAZING DISPLAY OF CONTROL AND SPEED! I LOVE A MAN IN CONTROL OF HIMSELF!!!

AWESOME!!