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by Crazi

person dexia
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully smutty, just how I love them...

Keep up the great work!!!
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Seemed a bit rushed, but it was still hot. I would have liked a bit more background, but it's a PWP so I guess it's not really necessary. Nice job. ^_^
person AnonyMiss
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have one problem with this. Spit is not an affective lubricant. Besides that everything else when well. The dialogue was fitting. And the tone and description were very good.
person JP"\
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pretty good i want more
person Ru-Shin
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is struggling not to fall into a momentary lapse of fangirlism*

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*fails*

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! *imaginary hearts float around everywhere* That was great! Even though it jumped straight into the juicy part and was a bit short, I loved it. ^^ There is a serious lack of Static Fanfics on this site. :O