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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, u so have to update this story is great.. i so have to read the rest.. i really hope u finish this baby
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story.... I think you can 'expand it'.
Don't be shy, go for it!
Don't be shy, go for it!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice one.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can go to the KP Slash Haven Board,there are a lot of Kigo fans there.You can post your story there and ask for a beta-reader if you want.They can help you with this story,but I think this story would have to be in the mature section over there.The members over there are nice to people and they like to read new stories.Update Soon
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can you please post this story on the KP Slash Haven Board,I heard there is a lot of fans over there.Update Soon
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It could really use some commas and other symbols like '?' and stuff in the story. Other than that it's okay. Not that great but still okay.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice stuff there, but you need to proof read your work to get rid of a few little errors or get a beta to do it for you. other than that awsome, nicely written.