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Please write another chapter

Freakin awesome!

Congratulate yourself. This is the highest I've rated a story like this.

Not bad considering that I *highly* doubt Velma would not know what male genitalia would be used for, *or* be caught watching spooge on her computer. OR flaking out because a dog sprouted wood in front of her. If the sight of an erection caused her to wig out, what was she doing watching hard-core porn?

It's good to remember that Velma is the brains of the outfit. Compared with her, both Fred and Daphne are *doorknobs* And Shaggy would be a cowardly sponge.

Is that part offensive? No. It's inconsistent, and contrary to canon.

As for Scrappy and Scooby, *my* experience with such matter is that dogs are almost *born* knowing how to use their family 'enhancement.' Scooby comes across as being virtually asexual, more interested in food than females OR males. Scrappy is too cocky and too self-assured to want his uncle's advice in such things. I *might* see it happening the other way around, though.

In a milieu filled with stupid characters, this would work. Now, change the characters around so that Daphne is watching the flick, and Scooby is receiving the lecture from Scrappy, it would sound a LOT more convincing.

Good. Read better, but overall good.

Well, sorry to dissapoint you. I won't be editing this one at all, sorry. I didn't like the original theme of it anyways. Yeah the characters were OOC, I mean dogs can't talk in the first place. Nor can they masturabte, and they can't sit down and blow themselves either. That's what makes it creative though? Again, sorry to dissapoint.

Its fine if you don't edit but I hate it when people can't tell the difference between fake and fictional. If something is fake its not true if its fictional it neveer happened but it has to have rules. In scooby the rules are that he and scrappy can talk, they're very smart(for dogs) and that people constantly go around in costumes to scare people. You pretty much broke that rule by making him talk like a human and you broke a major rule of fan fiction by making the characters OOC for no useful reason. I'm fine with partial OOC so you can manage to get 2 characters to have sex since they wouldn't do it normally but you pretty much had no good reason. And in my eyes thats one of the worst things a fan fiction writer can do.

It wasn't bad I'm just glad you did the challenge. Although one thing I didn't want was for it to be "the talk" kind of situation. The problem I had was that the characters were completely OOC. I really had scrappy and scooby in mine while this could've easily been anyone. No odd way of talking from scooby no over confident additude from scrappy. And scrappy usually seems smart for his age and in this he was like a little kid...literally I mean besides replacing hand and paw it could've been anything. Anyway kind of generic you need to work on that but otherwise it was written ok. When I get a chance I'll give a full review in the challenge.

Also I should mention that the original idea was that scrappy knew he was way bigger than average and that it was just him. And like his normal additude he wasn't nervous or anything about it and he was kinda lording it over everyone. Anyway something like that.