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for Meg The Slave

by LesbianLovers

person qrrbirbbel
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey pal...there's an invention out there called the enter key...ever heard of it?...

Otherwise, it was a good story.
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was really good, but kind of hard to read. (One paragraph per line.) You should write more...a lot more.