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person Skizz
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mrrr....I'm just gonna review here. Cause I'm a LAZY BUM ;D. Haven't read it alll, but I like what I've read so far. ...Constructive cristism isn't my forte, sorry. I'm just " :O Oooo shiny! Cool~!". :O Shiny.
person Manga-Chick
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OI! I didn't know you posted this!!! After devouring each and every story, I am here to review the ones that I like.
The first story was very freakin' awesome. Dark, intense, and violent; I liked it. It had the yummy splash of twisted psycho-ness that makes every story fun if written well. THAT one was my favorite.
03-Only A Kiss: I love the Killers, especially that song. It goes well with the SS world, in my opinion. I loved the cross-dressing bit, the taste of the forbidden and the unexpected. R would make a good girl if he tried. I loved how possessive Hs seemed, and how he got his way and paved their future together. That one gave me the case of the huggles.
05-Such A Blur: This one took me back to summer vacation, where that was just wasted on each other. That one was nice and fluffy, and very happy. This line, 'He can be so sweet when I'm angry with him' really makes me squeal, for some reason. It's very fluffy, and yet not. I love this one second.
13-Start A Fire: This one was just...yum. Seme R...heh. you don't get that alot. He can be aggressive, too!
15-I'll Make You: This one was another post of 'Toxic', or whatever.
17-Waiting For The Sun: I liked this one because it was cliche, and I still got to see how determined and possessive Hs can be when he puts his mind to it. I liked this one third. ^_^
AND LAST OF ALL, YAY FOR ALL THE SMUT AND DIRTY LOVIN" FOR PRACTICALLY EVERY CHAPTER!!! I seriously overdosed on your last fic, and all of these ones. I can't get enough of these two. Will you do more one-shots? I'm just so happy that there's another person out there that does this pairing! Much mucho thanks and lovin' to ya!
person Simon_the_duck
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All very good - I liked the ones at the beginning better though. By the by, I think "Slippin' Under" has been double-posted under "I'll make You."

Keep writing Static Shock fiction! *bows*