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Actually SM, I think what Naughty Tooner was suggesting was that Drakken is packing a 'WMO' (weapon of Mass Orgasm) not a WMD, and he's gonna drive Shego wild with that "Pocket Rocket".. As for Jason, that guy I guess is gonna definitely do something with Bonnie, and Kitty the club manager? Holy Crud! she works for Global Justice?!!! (as do Hirotaka and Yori?) and what's up with Tara and Josh's Kinkiness? what next? edible Body Oil? I guess Tara is really the quiet shy girl who is more like the "Girl gone wild" type. (Oh if Ron only knew!) I mean any sweet demure innocent looking woman like Tara, who gets wild has got to have her own 'dirty little secrets'!

BTW. Damn! is shego going to get her man? do the others ever find out her secret?

Great chapter. I'm quite intrigued as to what Hirotaka's up to. You've added a little mystery to the plot.

Well that certainly delivered. Gotta love those crazy ancient artifacts. I suppose I'll just assume the power of the talisman was why Kim/Yuri weren't as freaked out about what Fiske did as they otherwise would have been. ;)

Ooh R/K, I'd been wondering when you get around to them. Somehow I knew you were going to use the 'I can do anything' attitude. ;) The car incident was funny, and I think the behaviour in the plane scene was nicely distinct from the action in the previous chapters. Good job.

once again: Damn!

seriously though, having read the whole bonnie ballerina series up to here, i have to say i'm impressed. especially since i don't usually read fics like this. i'm happy to say, you are a very good author.

Not bad at all not bad at all. I agree with the other that you done a good with the descripetion when they dance. I'm glda that you got Bonnie to stop thinking about Brick and Monique at the moment, but proablly be a litlle upset at her succes at getting Brick to pass his math class. Just don't get to over carried with occ without making it clesar as why a character would do something like that. Update!!!

Be careful about the M/F sex scenes. Try to keep the participents in character. How Monique behaved was a bit overboard for her. Otherwise I have been enjoying this series very much.

Great work; I appreciate the long and (semi) regular updating. I also enjoy the graphic and descriptive style. Many writers can't/don't do that well.

one word says it all. damn!