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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how the center didn't send them any 'normal' p.j.s, that was so great. This chapter was very hot and Diana and Martin are just too cute. When Martin took the phone from Diana that had to be my favorite part *drools* oh how I love when he acts like that. Also the story of Kristoff and Juliana was very good, I liked it. Very hopeful. I can't wait to hear what Diana and Martin have to say! =D
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't really consider it incest since they aren't related by blood, but it's a good idea to keep the warning there. Apart from that, this story shows much potential. I'm not sure why you aren't continuing it (I have read the author's notes, but I may have missed that part), but I hope that you do. Martin/Diana seem to be a very tragic couple, at least in my eyes. Do not give up on this story; you will be disappointing many people if you do.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it u HAVE TO KEEP GOING i like martin and diana parings and the story line is asum(sp) i can't wait to see them KISS
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please!!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is not fair it stops in the middle keep going with it please and im an incest fan sorry if that disgust's u but i am any please continue with this story it great thanks bye
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is a really good story i would like to see the next chpter please
sorry i didn't wright more but i'm not big on wrighting i love the story and can't wait to see the next chappy
sorry i didn't wright more but i'm not big on wrighting i love the story and can't wait to see the next chappy
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love it. But how dose this have incest in it when the two are not even really brother and sister? Anyway, update soon!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pay no attention to the negative review posted above. He or she could at least have the decency to pick a unique alias. Good luck on your mid-terms. I appreciate the fact that you at least put care into the quality of your writing. It shows that you care.
Now here comes the redundant part: update as soon as your mid-terms are over, because I can't wait to see what happens next!
Now here comes the redundant part: update as soon as your mid-terms are over, because I can't wait to see what happens next!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lololol. Moronic. I would stop writing if I were you.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, I love it! You are a lovely writer and I can't wait to read more.