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for Mirror of the Heart

by BlueBlaze25

person Ri
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww no smut. Its cool i can wait *sits and eats cookies* For some odd reason i was imagingin Danny waking up to see his half naked in bed. XD I have such a pervy mind. Anyways hey is Danny in his boxers? Well duh i mean if halfa can see him and describe the way he did i am guessing yes. I loved how he described Danny, so sexy. Anyways cannot wait to read more. I want to see how Sam and Tucker are going to react. ^^ Great chapter weeee bye!
person miko hanyou
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!Truely one of the stories with Danny P./Danny F. pairing i have been waiting for,Please Continue!
person Elle-dono
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh, you wanted 59 reviews...So it's time for the EGO BOOST! (dun dun dunnnn!)

-Fenton Easy-Bake Oven (equals) Pure brilliance

-Writing technique (equals) Awesome

-Everything (equals) Rockin' my sockin's

And now you have 59 reviews
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved your story! update soon! there aren't enough fenton/phantom fics out there. i've only read a few of them.
person sinsoftime
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fainaly! another chapter! its about time, lol. ive been checking almost every night! Dan? ok, that works. I drool much more than he does when i watch DAnny Phantom, lol. Did u see the Christmas special??! It was soooooo cute!
person Click
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"His breathing raced into pants"
I just really like that line. It made me laugh.
Now! Write more!
person Elle-dono
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, you want more than 59 reviews? I think you can get waaaay more than that. Too late for the warning about that Pookey crap; I read it when I first entered the affnet DP fandom.

N.E.W - Q.U.O.T.E (for when the birds and the bees go about it like bunnies and you're stuck wondering where the fuck your muse went):

-'O what Fate hath befallen thee; when thoust hath lost thy faith, and thy armpits grow trees!'
-'I hath no fear; for the divine essence of Destiny shall kick Fate's tiny round arse!'
-'Thoust wish to bet aponst they wager?'
-'Eh, sure. Why the fuck not?'

And now, to honor the worst fic ever written-
POOOOOOOOOOOOOOKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYY SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKSSSSSSSSS ASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
person Ri
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More!! Loved the preview ^^
person Harnia
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Goddess... I love you so much. *glomps*

The is the most smuttiest thing in Danny vs Dan P. in all of Danny Phantom history. *drool*
Dang it, you made me all wanting for more!
... Which means it's time to recruit more zombie fangirls into the world of Danny Phantom yaoi.
I'll really recommend your fiction to them!!
THE SMUT! THE pr0n!! *__*

Quotes? I've got a scene for you... Sorry if it turns into utter cheesy crack. XD
#1
Dan P: Danny... what in the Ghost Zone is THAT?!
Danny: ... It's my costume for the school play.
Dan P: Danny... do you mind signing my boxers?
Danny: Why?
Dan P: I see the potential of a porn star in you, love.

Keep loving! More scenes/quotes will be sent through email. :3
... Because you have said so... *holds out a paddle* More smut or more paddles for you over my knee!
Rawr!

... Love(how ironic),
Harnia- *hugs you, you silly smutty fiction-author*
person Arain Rowan
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Please write more. Not exactly the hard-core chained-to-bed scene some of us were expecting, but a nice warm fuzzy end. which actually when you think about it, is pretty damn hard to write when someone's tied up in comparison to a hard-core evil scene that kinda easily coems when someone's pinned to the bed.