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*_____________* You are amazing! I love you! XD Hehe, this is AWESOME! I love it so much, everyone's in character, and Dan's just too cute. ^^ I like how he can't pay attention because he's too busy staring at Danny. (That happens to me a lot when I watch the show... XD lol) Good luck writing the next chapter, I can't wait to read~!!! :D

oh, replying to something you had in chap 2 in your a.n.'s.

if you would be so generous, i would be honored to beta your awesome story. my email should be in the reveiw screen, but just in case, its i n u f i c c r z y @ y a h o o . c o m. (just take out all the spaces)

ja ne!
p.s. i can't wait for the update!

hehehe, chap 1 [6] I get a cookie, brownie points, +6 intellegence.... ^.^
Great story Pe-- Blue :P

had to read it again for better appreciation. love it, love it, love it!!!!!!!!

(sighs in happiness)

hmmm. could they try to dye dan's hair? light blonde, as i think red would be too much.

so does jazz know about dp in this story? maybe she could help get him in with false school records, as she's such an honor student and assistant counsilor. not to mention come up with some kind of story if he stays at the fenton's house. like, for Jack and Maddie, "Oh, you remember Uncle, um, Chester, he called and said he was sending his son over, trouble wiht his divorce and all."
maddie: "i don't remember an Uncle Chester."
Jazz: "of course you don't, um, he's on dad's side of the family! (yeah, that's it, she muttered under her breath.) Dad took the call you know."
Jack: I did?
Jazz: Dad, you really need to work on your memory problem.
Jack: i guess so. well, Dan, our house is your house.
Dan: Thanks, Uncle Jack. (man that sounds weird.)
Danny: No kidding. (pulls Jazz aside as parents go down to lab) Uncle Chester? where do you come up with this stuff?

just a thought. (Jack and Maddie could keep trying to puzzle out who Uncle Chester is all through the story, like a running gag.)

more quotes!

Emergency hotline, please hold.
"Religion has done love a great service by making it a sin." Anatole France
"Sex is the thing that takes up the least amount of time and causes the most amount of trouble." John Barrymore

"If parents would only realize how they bore their children." George Bernard Shaw

Only the shallow know themselves. Oscar Wilde in other words, Paulina.

Lots of folks confuse bad management with destiny. Frank Hubbard

If you obey all the rules, you miss out on all the fun. Katherine Hepburn

Moral indignation is jealousy with a halo. H.G Wells

A little inaccuracy sometimes saves tons of explaination. Saki

I expect to pass through this world but once and, therefore, if there is anybody I want to kick in the crotch I had better do it now, for I do not expect to pass this way again. Maurice Bowra

Life is just one damned thing after another. Elbert Hubbard

I’m prepared to meet my Maker. Whether my Maker is prepared for the ordeal of meeting me is another matter. Winston Churchill

Millions long for immortality that don’t know what to do on a rainy Sunday afternoon. Susan Ertz

Stand firm in your refusal to stay conscious during algebra. In real life, I assure you, there is no such thing as algebra. Fran Lebowitz

I meant to review before this, but I completely forgot. ^^; Dawwww, this is cute and it's nice to see that I'm not the only one who thinks this pairing is cute! (I'm odd and strange and weird like that, but who cares?) I can't wait for more. ^^

sorry. i put the wrong email last time. lol. (im stupid)

OOOOOOHHHHHH, i love it! happy days for everyone!

as for the clothes issue, damn it! i wanted to see a naked ghost boy! oh well, this is life on earth, you can't have everything. where would you put it all?

Dan? he'd better think of a history fast if he's gonna go to school with danny. what will everybody say about them looking so similar? will the cover story be that dan (daniel being a family name in wisconsin, [where the show says that at least the parents went to college so i presume that's where the family is from]) is danny's cousin from wis. and will be staying a while? like, his parents are going through a divorce and want him out of the way or something like that? or would even the slightly oblivious townsfolk not be fooled and try to lynch him?

will they try to use the dreamcatcher to fuse them back? or will they be able to find the lady again? will she come to them, to explain what the 'salts' were, and why the dreamcatcher won't work? is she an old-school ghost hunter? (like van helsing style?)

sorry to bug you with so many questions, but i love this fic so much. i just can't wait to see what you do with it!

Quotes: I feel like i'm diagonally parked in a parallel universe. (perfect for this situation, don't you think?)
I collect these, so i hope you use at least one of them.

Jack: Thank god! the guacamole is dead at last! The Ham in the fridge prevails!

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and sometimes you need to knock out the teeth of a misinformed beholder.

Sam's first thought, drooling at the sight of the two Dannys : Thank you, lord, for this yummy buffet. Now break out the gravy and lets get this show on the road!

Tucker: Two of you?! Aw, man.
Danny: what's that supposed to mean?
Tucker: Christmas shopping is hard enough for just the one of you! what am i supposed to do now? Hit the electronics department of Ghost's-R-Us?

Dan, fuming: if i see one more double-take, i'll poke out someone's eye with a hot french fry!

Mr. Lancer: Life's like a Bowl of Cherries! Another Fenton to destroy the Chemisty Lab?! Wasn't one of you enough?!

Hee hee! hope you like them!

i think i may have fallen in love with you. this is the best DP fanfic EVER. please please please for the love a Jeebus update!!!


ps.-
i'll WORSHIP you if you update.
thank you for your time and i'm not crazy..... i promise.

You updated!!

Thank you for telling me! I almost melted into a puddle of fangirlism! *glomps*
More love sen through e-mail!!

Keep up the pervvy thoughts, Dan! :D