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for Seeing Red

by Florville

person Krimzon
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adored Purple's ego boost via the Invader and the one in training. Which, by the way, SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEECAMEOYAAAAYY!!!! Poorp Purple, he just seemed so dejected, I wanted..well...a hug, but he may have freaked and blasted me to bits. Man, Pur no longer wants 'those kind of touches', and really, who can blame him.

And Red smaking the shit out of Meero! That was tasty. I hope there is more of that? I do love how Meero is so defiant about it all. I'm assuming it's because he knows he is going to die, so that's why he is being so careless with his words? And those words are so very true. Meero stole something so precious...I...really want to draw a dismembered Meero right now...Too bad I have a hard enough time drawing a person whole as it is...Oh well. A practice piece then, with Meero as the subject. What's worse is that even I trusted him!!! DUDE!!!!

That is some amazing writing in this chapter. How Purple was paranoid around his crew, how he still maintamed his anger at Red (who does still deserve another good smack for good measure). I also like how Red doesn't tell Purple what he had done wth Meero, and what he hopefully will do.

I look forward to another chapter of your brilliance with patient giddyness. (huh, that seems to be the only thing I am patient about these days; waiting for new chapters....)
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh.. yay! Red was beating up on Meero. Poor Purple though.. =( I hope he feels better soon!
person Kari
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor purple. I actually like him a bit more than red.

Red needs to go all comforting on him. <3
person Tama-sama
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, poor Purple! -.- All sad feeling n' stuff! Red must feel HORRIBLE, huh? Just terrible-awful! I can't wait for more now! O.o
person !!
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! This one is brilliant! I feel so sorry for Purple though...
person Krimzon
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I see. And it would have made sense to him too, since as far as Meero knew, there was still someone out to assasinate Purple...

I loved this chapter. I was so very deeply appreciative how you didn't make Purple just forget about the bumlike way Red had been behaving. Usually, when I read this kind of thing, the victim usually loses all personality and becomes nothing more than a victim. You have given Purple a true character who has so far behaved very bravely in the face of what he has been through. Even snapping at Red was just so perfect for him. And his pain felt so very real. I mean, even I was hurt when Red said that 'stupid little lover" line.

My word. This story has so much depth, and so much to offer. I can only imagine just what will happen in future chapters of Seeing Red.

Much love!

Krimzon
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww.. this chapter was really sad. I feel bad for both of them.
person Kharn
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Purple. He's been so used... great chapter. Thats all i have to say. *Walks into distance*
person GothycCoalChambr (not signed in)
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* you're so evil! But none the less I continue to read your stories, lol. That certainly was a shocker tho. Keep up the good work my Tallest! Much lurve to you and your awesome stories!
person Kharn
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was truly disturbing. The fact that Purple has practacly no one whom he trusts now is so sad that it almost made me put of finishing the chapter. Very well done as usual, and as for Meero... Well I'm sure youll think of something suitable. With praise, Kharn