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for Seeing Red

by Florville

person Krimzon
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that first bit had me tearing up. I mean, near tears, dude! And that second bit had me giggling like a mofo while I'm sure me roomies were looking at me oddly. And that last bit...oh man, that last bit was intense, beautiful, and heartwrenching. My goodness, Will Red be able to gain back his coTallest's trust? Will Pur be able to come to terms with what happened to him? Perhaps a great deal more of Meero tourture will help us all out on those issues?

Ah, well, until next update, you fantabulous person, you!
person Night Shade
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic! I like all your stories in general actually... ^.^
please update ANY of your fics soon!

Your loyal reader,
Night Shade
person GothycCoalChambr (not signed in)
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A private exucution? Hope you've got some good details for us. *grins evilly* Well again I don't have much to say, the migraines make it kinda hard to think. Good work as always my Tallest. *LURVE*
person One eyed jester
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant and sentimental. I loved it. I'm usually not a red purple fan but you've made me one. I'm a real nut on accurate charecther development so i have to say wow again. I wasn't expecting Purple to think that he didn't deserve red's love but it makes sense. and it would be true. Your piece was beautiful, again, you are a master.
*hearts*
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaah!! you have no idea how happy i was to see this story! it's been a couple months since i've checked the zim pages and yesterday i was in the zim mood (as happens when you watch three zim eps in a row..) and decided to see if there was anything new worth reading, and lo and behold i find yours!! and i was LITERALLY like *squeeeeeeeeeeeee!! there's a tallest fic with CHAPTERS!!!* omftezuka i love the tallest! especially purple, ahhhh he's so great, but even better is them *together* and i love how you're writing them... when meero raped purple, i was like holy fuck! poor purple, but i think it was fitting.. there would have to be an *extreme* fall out between them for purple to consider forgiving red completely, wouldn't there... and then red tearin' up meero in the holding cell, and purple seeing all that on the surveillance, that was great... but even better was purple totally *losing* it and wailin' on him... and now red and purple are sweet yay! so i can't wait til you update, i can't wait to read what happens next... oh yeah, and last night during an icaf (a yahoo group i'm in) conference on YIM i told my friend gothycoalchamber i was reading an awesome zim fic that she'd been reading and she guessed right on the first try heehee (translation: you so rock, since your fic is the first that comes to mind ^__~) so keep up the good work and update soon!!
person Ynnep
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm....this is mature? O_o I think it's a sweet story! ^_^ HEY IS THERE MORE OR IS THIS THE END? MORE DAMMIT!!!!!!!! ^_^
person Tamagoakura
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Teeheehee, emo lovey gooey fluffy crap! YAY! ^_^ Gotta love some fluff, eh? Oooh, I can't WAIT to see Meero DIE! Bwahahahahahaaaa!
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh.. another great chapter in this great fic! I'm glad Purple is finally starting to trust Red a little more about his feelings.
person BurningSilence
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! The get-together scene! This chapter made me feel much better during my sickyness time (it might not mean much, but I managed to read this while on NyQuil and a fever...and it made SENSE!) And Red arranged for a private execution...hmmm...good for him, I hope it's painful. So very painful...

and how WILL said execution work? Just a deactivation or more? My personal feelings...I hope it's more.

Ugh, I was hoping to leave a longer reveiw, but I think I'm dying...but don't worry, I'll be back soon, hopefully with more to say! ^_^

BurningSilence
person Kharn
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'nother good chapter, which is i suppose expected seeing as its you writing, lol, took me ages to finish reading it as i had so much other stuff to do (namley dinner)
And execute Meero? NICE. whats the bet something goes wrong? ^_^