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for Seeing Red

by Florville

person VTSFY
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kyahahahaha! They're too cute for words!
Clueless 'lil Purple and devious Red! ^^ And I lurve the nickname: "Pur"! w00t!
person littleshipper
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another fic from you? And it's RAPR!! :D This is starting out really good! I wonder if Purple will find Red's logbook...
person InvaderMonkey
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i reeeeeally don't like that guy.......meero! -_- he's a boyfriend theif he's screwing red's chances at getting purple!!! hey r u gonna kill him? i can call johnny? *evil smile*
person Kharn
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! Purples so cluless! I love how Red's sheer obviousness goes unnoticed by his co leader. Update soon! ^_^
person Daaku
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've seen that picture before. It was quite a bit back, though I remember. I suppose it could give you an idea to type this up, since the text gives hint to the letter currently centered in this story.

But, yes. You do make me happy. Of course, to me, Purple has always seemed rather dense. Or 'goofy'. Whichever suits you best. That's where your creative thingy comes in, to make his personality more interesting and unpredictable. (:

Yay. [Heart.]
person BurningSilence
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, at first, I didn't like Meero (for obvious reasons) but...he's so *nice*! And Red *is* being a little creepy, I'd be a little scared too if I were Purple. The Meero/Purple parts are absolutely adorable! They're like really cute teenagers in love, almost! But I also feel badly for Red, although I think he can handle himself...

And camera's in the bathroom? Red's kind of a voyeur, isn't he? Bad, naughty, evil Red and poor clueless, naive Purple. Tsk tsk tsk. I can't wait for the next chapter!

*BurningSilence*
person raavika
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, another chapter. I'm looking forward to wherever you're going to take this. Heh, poor clueless Purple. I wonder what will happen when he figures out what's going on.
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I didn't think you were going to continue this fic.. haha.. I don't know why. Anyway. I loved this chapter!
person Tama-Sama
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I can't wait to see what happens! XD Stupid Meero, hogging Purple like that... -.- *Huffs* Teeheehee, I can't wait for more!
person Krimzon
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'Warm, and Purple-filled.' Don't we all wish we had nights that were filled with Purple? *sigh*

I don't know just how Red's gonna pull this off. Purple's so clueless, and I guess just not into Red at all. You most assuredly have me guessing, my sweet. And I'm liking the Purple/Meero parts now. CUTE! CUTE, GodDamnit! OH, and Purple's little aggressive snap at Red was a nice touch, making Red beginning to question his brilliant plan like that. I can't wait to see just how this is going to turn out...and I said that already. I'm done now.