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for Seeing Red

by Florville

person InvaderMonkey
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u know red should really be more careful where he puts his thigs..-_-. and thats y i don't keep diaries that and the fact i'm to lazy to ever actually update it..yeah lol! ^_^ great chapter! uuu wuts purple gonna dooo! hey that ryhmd! ^_^ srry hehe in a good mood! ^_^0
person VTSFY
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I'm a new-reviewy peep! ^^
I've mainly been reading Fullmetal Alchemist fiction, but I got bored and drifted into the Cartoon section. I was shocked - yet thoroughly pleased - to find a Zim section. And a Red 'n' Purple yaoi! Wheeeee!
A friend of mine was reading it over my shoulder the first time, and I say you should be PROUD! You converted her from a canon girl to a yaoi-freak! *high five* Now, we go around teasing each other. "Hey, Purple." "Hey, Red."
...Okay, enough blathering about me! XD

*cracks knuckles* Meero... Grr.
Poor Red. Plan backfiring so easily, and all...
And poor Pur for being so dense. JUMP HIM, PURPLE! JUMP HIM! XD *readies camera*

Actually, I'd be willing to draw fanart for this if you'd like. Just lemme know if you're interested, describe Meero, and (if possible) send me a few refernce pics. (To email me, delete SPAM from the address. To let me know it's you, put something along the lines of "Red and Purple Yaoi" in the Subject bar, please. Thank you!)

And, for the sake of all that is Irken, CONTINUE! <3
person Tama-sama
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lmao, voice automated armour!? XD Awsome! Meero, you little... *Grrr* Oh well. *Shrugs* Awsome, as your work always is! ^_^
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Voice-automated clothing. Haha. That's funny! Good chapter!
person Yaoifanboy
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! VOICE ACTIVATED CLOTHING!!! *ROFL* I LOVE IT X3X3

Poor Red.. ;__; Give him some hot lurvin from Purple, don't be cruel to him! ;__;

I love it... you must continue! *GLOMPS*
person InvaderMonkey
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sigh..GO NNY! great chapter as usual! voice activated clothing haha. poor purple no freedom. but then again poor red...heartbroken, my freind has the same problem. i was wondering will this FOREVER UNTIL IT ENDS be PurxOc romance? i miss red! *sniff*
person Kharn
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA! Oh dear whats Red up to now? Heh heh, this is such a good fic, funny and yet serious. Update soon, and I relized i didn't copliment you on the name. Ahem, Good choice of name. ^_^
person BurningSilence
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Purple's so dense! He even had it pointed out to him that Red is all in love with him... Of course...Red's not being a very good boy. Tsk tsk tsk. But he should be careful with his jealousy...he's going to drive Purple farther away.

But I love this chapter! It has some angst, and yet...it's still pretty cute!
person Levi
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hooray, more fantastic stories!

Poor Red and Purple. Red for being all 'WTF I WANT LOOOOOOOOVE' and Purple for being so clueless. ^^

Five starts. Fwee.
person yaoifanboy
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be the hottest story I ever read... I just know it... I know it cuz my english is bad right now... yeah...

GOD! CONTINUE! X3