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for Seeing Red

by Florville

person littleshipper
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I came home today to find not one, but TWO chapters of this story! You have made my night. *bows* But anyway, looks like this is moving pretty fast (but it doesn't seem rushed, so that's good!) since Purple already found Red's logbook. I kinda feel bad for Red, but it was his own deception that got him there :-\ Well, I guess I'll have to wait to see what happens. I'm loving this story! You're doing a great job
person Yaoifanboy
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! It's so saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad... ;__; don't go Pur! *tackles him*

I love this story... it's my favorite couple, written by my favorite authoress! =3 This chappie was so sad though... I thought that Red was finally going to get away with it... :'(
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=( Poor Red. Update soon! I MUST know what happens!
person vtsfy
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0o0 *wobbles then keels over*

I kinda wasn't expecting that! Sure, it's logical for a fallout, but WHOA! It's still unexpected. I dunno what to say but "More!". *sees friend sleeping on couch* I'll talk to her later, heh.
person BurningSilence
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh...Purple found out...I wonder how Red's going to explain this. Ah! I can't stand the suspense! What's going to happen? Btw, I like the whole 'clap on clap off' concept for the clothing ^_^ It makes me think of those clapper commercials...and now I have the jingle stuck in my head...O.o
person vtsfy
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you converted someone. Apparently, my incessant rambling and the constant mental images I provide her, along with finally caving in and reading "Seeing Red" sent her tumbling over the edge. XD

Uh-oh! Red's been busted! o.o; This is going to get interesting.
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person Kharn
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So the truth is out. Purple seems a bit confused with his life right now... update soon! ^_^
person Krimzon
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh CRAP! Red! How could you be sp caareless!? I can't wait...I have the perfect dance picked out and everything.

And that was so cute, really, how sad Red was, and how Purple began to feel for him... And then...the Peek...

And thank you! *puts ass back on*
person Tama-sama
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, FINALLY Purple figures things out! He can be such a meat-brain sometimes. ^_^ Poor Red, he seems to be in pretty bad shape... -.- I hope everything works out! ^_^ Stupid Meero! *Is still all mad at him for coming between Red and Purple* Oh well, he's okay, I guess...
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=\ Poor Red. He cares but does it matter? Of course not.. isn't that always how it goes? Ehh.. sorry. I liked the chapter.. really!