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by RWO

schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was sick and funny at the same time.
gemini



that made me look at the rugrats in a new light
KC
person revange
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Revange is so sweet iset it good job man this was well writting.
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would get a beta reader if I were you, quite a few words were misspelled, and the grammar could use a lot of work. A beta will also help you come up with better phrases than "meat pole"......
person shampoo
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uhhh... that was interesting...
person Sean
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting fic, please write more.