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for Warmth

by Spleef

person Wallygirl
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far. i hope you will have more chapters to come. read my story as well in the kids next door section called my special knight. keep up the good work!
person buffytvs
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG -- When you told me about this, I was like -- no... no way are you co-writing smut for a kids show. But... damn. DAMN! And... DAMN!!! I have only seen a handful of avatar episodes, (mostly because you are forcefeeding them to me ;P), and I could honestly say that I've never thought about those particular characters engaging in these kind of activities. ESPECIALLY with each other! Now, this is all I'm going to be able to think about when watching the show, damn you both. Now I have to check out what your co writer has written, since her story seems to be so popular and she seems to have better taste than you ;P (shipping that little boy with that girl when she could have a hawt prince? I'm surprised at u, j -- u usually go for the bad boys, i.e. spike). Anyway, hats off to both of you -- this is fantastic smut. You should definately change the names of the characters and submit it to some nudy rag... ;). Peace!
person Ebil Toblerone
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet sweet smut. This was awesome. I'm not a great fan of yaoi but this was hawt. Kudos.
person anon
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I now need to change my underwear -- and I'm at work! DAMN U BOTH FOR MAKING ME SO DAMNED HORNY BEFORE LUNCH. :)
person the_one_who_says_moo
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!! *runs around looking for something to jump, then comes back and grumbles about only male things in the house being two fixed cats........*
person CM
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heee I thinkthis pairing is great! You two didi a good job! It's unbelievably cute at some points and hot in others...heh hot. oops. lol.
person Ryukotsusei
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am in awe of the both of you. Your writing talents are amazing. Another brilliantly done chapter, I've greatly enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work!
person thechickenlittle
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now, i had my doubts about this, but you just very pleasently surprised me. thank you both!! this was hot!
person Ninja Kasuga
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can only say one word to tell how I like this.

"BOOYAH!"
person Ninja Kasuga
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm dunno if the authors plan it but it'd be fun to see the boys DP (double penetrate) or DV (double vaginal) our lovely water bending goddess.