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for Daddy's Little Girl

by DragonForlorn

person Katie
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great I loved it I mean really loved it but now I'm sad could you make another chapter PLEASE!
person J
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just a little something I mentioned in another review that you might find useful for your story.

Danny's suit was fused to his body when he was in that accident. His daughter does not have that little advantage.

(Smiles like a Cheshire Cat)
person Bishonen
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
of course i want it finished and so do my Samurai flesh eating pandas.
With love; Imasuky Lomae
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue, i like the plot