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wut happened! how could they do that! humans r sick sick sick jerks!!>_< aw i wonder how poor zimmy is! lol nice chappie!

" One of the talk shows debated the legality of the footage. One side argued that one of the participants wasn’t an adult yet, and so the sex videos should be treated as child pornography. The other argued that neither of the participants were human, and thus couldn’t claim the human rights that would make such pornography illegal. The latter party seemed to be winning the argument, although both parties agreed that anyone who could take sexual pleasure from watching such material was a sick, sick individual indeed. "

Oh, so we're all sick, sick little stink-beasts, now, are we? :P

I loved this chapter... sex... *drool* while not graphic, it was actually done tastefully enough probably to be put on a non-smut site! I'd like to see graphic sex from you, you seem like a talented author, and so... yeah... ^_^

Ohmygawd. This is interesting, and kewl. Don't fuckin' stop. Because. I'll find a way to dump army ants into your bed. Once I find your current location.

this is awesome!! continue ^_^

Oh, man. That was amazing!! I wonder where you might be going with this one...

I hope it's not going to be a sad ending. It was sad enough what happened to poor Zim, and now Dib.

I am happy to have seen more of your work on this site. This is now another fave of mine. Until next update!

Whoo!! *fans self* Yummy alien hermaphroditey sex! *dances* Very well done, very well written. I really like how when the lights go out, we finally know that Dib and Zim are alone. Or maybe they aren't? (who knows, I am just a meagre reader). This was a great chapter...I can't wait to see what you have in mind for these two in their impenetrable habitat...

~Florville

b-e-a-utiful! i wonder wuts gonna happen to zim and dib now that the horrible how i hate them scientists abandoned them*cough assholes cough* i hope they get out son!! can't wait for the next one! ^_^

b-e-a-utiful! i wonder wuts gonna happen to zim and dib now that the horrible how i hate them scientists abandoned them*cough assholes cough* i hope they get out soon!! can't wait for the next one! ^_^

Son of a MONKEY! This is awesome! This idea is so unique. It really is. I am speechless. Observe my lack of speech...

I do have to ask that you not be mad at be when I get Subjugation posted... I had some ideas for that story that were already in here. I was simply too slow in my writing. But it's very diferetnt, I promise!

This story is incredible. Absolutely incredible. I'm so amazed I don't even know how to express it. You're an excellent writer. I love the au you've created, where Dib is the bait rather than the one hunting Zim down. And it's so sad what's been done to Dib...I mean, it was sad in the show how his dad was never home and always ignored him and treated him like he was nuts, but it's even more sad that his dad won't help him and is using him like this. *pets Irken Dib*

I like how you've portrayed Zim's character. Still very in character, but with that little added bit of pride in his species, enough to take Dibbers under his wing. Excellent.

I can't wait to see what the next chapters bring. Keep writing, this is excellent!

Highest Regards,
Florville