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Oh man, where'd ya go? It's very painful here on the edge of the seat...

Seriously. I think I lost feeling in me legs around the beginning of November...

I hope this fic didn't die! I'll give you a hug, if that will bring it back to life!

*HUG*

Better now?

OMG OMG OMFG!!! Simmons, you evil bastard! Grrr... Anywho, niiiiice! *Smiles all creepy like* Can't wait for more! *Dances away into nowhere*

Wow...this chapter absolutely wrenched on my emotions. And rrrgh, that bastard Simmons. *growls* I still don't quite know what to make of his appearance and the lack of difficulty of his access to Zim. Not only that, I'm guessing this story won't have a happy ending...

WHAT!!! SIMMONS!!!! *hyperventalating* NOOOOOOO!!!! NOJONOHIJHGJFHEOSUG!!!!!!!!!!!

There can't just be one more chapter. There's at least two, right? A last chapter and an epilogue? Right? Cause this was so damn good. Holt CRAP!

And PLEEEEEEEEEEEAASE let the ZIM be okay! Hasn't he gone through enough? *sobs for ZIM*

....and he doesn't answer :/. Poor Dib. So wierd to imagine him as irken. I like it XD.

OOOH, Simmons is so SLIMY. *growls* Anyway, this was a wonderful chapter...I love how well you've expressed Dr. Membrane's character...not only that, shown that in spite of his devotion to science, he does have a sense of morals and ethics. And the fact that he does seem to care about Dib is so touching...and you know, I never really thought of how large Professor Membrane is, but he is! He's pretty huge, now that I think of it. *muses* Anyway, great work, and trust me, your writing is VERY MUCH appreciated.

Regards,
Florville

Aw man, this chapter actaullay had me tearing up! *sniff* I must say, I am liking Prof. Membrane's portrail in this. While no where near the perfect father, he is still doing the cool, protective father thing for the Dib. Kudos. I can't wait...well, there's just so many things I can't wait for, so let's just start with damn near everything this story has to offer.

And that's sweet of you, saying me n' Florville rock this fandom. That really made my week, being compared to the greatness like that *joyous sniffle*

But seriously, your work is quite literally fantasmic! The way you write these happeneings is chilling, or sweet, or just plain tear jerking, depening on what's going on. And I rarely feel things like that when I read a fanfic. Usually, I either enjoy it, or I don't. But this is incredible!

I really look foward to your next update!

-Krimzon

Wow, that sucks! Imagine waking up one morning and seeing yourself in compromising positions being broadcasted all over the world! What does Dib's Dad think about this? He must've seen the footage by now too. But didn't the power go out, supposedly? Isn't that why the lights turned off? How could the cameras even SEE anything, if the rooms were pitch black? Equiped with night-vision sensors, maybe? And what about Zim? What happened to him? What's GOING to happen!? Update soonish!

Holy son of a craP!@(&!%^%#$%@ Wow. I hadn't realized how therapudic it was to hit all those symbol marks to cuss. Saves time of actually having to spell out the words. I think I'll do it again... &^$^%#%$@@^$&%*&%(&^(&^(*(^SON OF A @^%#%$@#*^%*(&^^(^(*^(*(^*^(*(*^(*^(*^%$#@#$@$#@$#@#$!(*%*#Q%*$%&$^&(*&^4iu6923495. Dude. I mean. Dude.

Anywhoozle, this is just amazing. And I kid you not. You are up there with the great Florville und the Lady Laguna, in my book, anyway. And you will cement that place with another speedy update like this...XD

I really liked this chapter...I like the idea that Zim could be clinical and passionate at the same time. And the human exploitation of the footage was all too true. Sadly, that's just what humans do. And science, especially the Membrane brand of science, is invasive. I'm not surprised that Zim and Dib were being watched and recorded. I just wonder if his Dad watched. *shudders* And I hope Zim is okay...