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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Been a while since I checked this fic not a lot of new chapters but the plot you streted semmes like it could be intresting one tip get a proof reader to fix it up it made my story look a lot better
With Love;Imasuky Lomae
With Love;Imasuky Lomae
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oohh good story keep it going!
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well it wasn't terrible. But a virgin whole would exerience alot of pain from an cock or tentacle that was big. Plus there is something it would break and more pain.
And it would help to use spacing. Break them into easy to swallow paragraphs.
I do hope you make another chapter
And it would help to use spacing. Break them into easy to swallow paragraphs.
I do hope you make another chapter
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hee-he-heeee, sorry i didnt review in a while i was unaware of when the the site got up and running again, but i'm delited to see that you've continued updating, heee-hee, and a PLOT no less, heee-he-heee. well i'm still an avid reader of your story and i hope to see a Chapter six very soon, heee-he. take care, and thanks for all the notices and the ends of your chapters
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but possibly a little anatomically incorrect on the Ophelia/Tauros chapter. If I'm not mistaken about Centaurs their reproductive organs would be located in the same place as their animal side, not their human sides, are making the fact of him holding her up and thrusting into her at the same time impossible. Of course I never took Greek Mythology so if you can prove me wrong then please respond with a website where I can find the most info on Centaurs in one of my stories, please. And log in before replying so I know it's from you.
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hee-hee-heeee. Plots always good. A little short, but im glad to see that you didn't abandon the story. hee-heee. I look forward to a review. And Thanks for the mention. hee-he
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee-hee-heeee-eee-he-he-heee-heee, Very good, hee-hee, I've been waiting for an update from you, and this story was worth the wait. the chapters with Tauros and Graj were the best so far, but they have all been very good. Hee-heeee, keep up the good work.
-Psycho the Weasel
-Psycho the Weasel
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to update this it's got alot of promise.
With love; Imasuky Lomae
With love; Imasuky Lomae
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hee-hee-hee, Please, Take your time, there's no rush, I look forward to your update, Hee-hee-he, I'll keep checking up on the story
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really hot. There's not enough tentacle shit out there, you know? :3 Lol poor June was raped by a weird little monster. Ever considered doing a threesome fic with her and her two brothers? That would be even cooler than this! But hey, this got me hot. x3