rate_review Reviews

Hello --

This is quite a well-written story, but I do need to call you on something -- this story, the premise and the details, reads almost exactly like Amanuensis's A Spell to Turn Tigers to Butter, in which Harry Potter is captured by Lord Voldemort and both Lucius and Snape must share him. I know it isn't a coincidence because they're so alike, right down to the Dark Lord/Fire King asking Harry/Aang about their virginity and then torturing them for three days when no answer was forthcoming, and also the part where both Zhao and Zuko/Snape and Lucius speak up for the 'toy' at the same time.

Please credit Amanuensis for her idea.

Itsirtou
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Yay! I'm so happy someone wrote a Zuko/Aang fic that's well written and GOOOOOD!

I hope you update soon! xD

I enjoyed reading this, nicely done.

Meow. Yay! You updated! >.< That makes me happy! >.> sorry I didn't review for the other chapters, my accound was deleted and I didn't want to have to start up another account till I was just to bord and had nothing to do. Anyhow! At this time I would just love to tell you how much your story has captivated me! It's really hard to find Aanuko fanfiction, let alone good fanfiction. This is by far my fav out of all that I have read. I'm not a big fan of the different povs just because I think they generaly lack necessary discription, but there are several out there that are amazingly good for the style. Again, this is one of those for me. One of the things that I really love about this fanfiction is how well you get to know the characters through your writing. Most lack the character support factor, but I manage to get really attached to the characters as you portray them. I absulotly love Zuko! I really sympithize for him for Aang's reaction to his love. And Aang's thoughts really managed to weigh hevily on my chest in this chapter. One part I liked particularly was when he had to run the thoughts through his head over and over again. -I am really looking forward to the chapters to come, and I'll be sure to check on this fanfiction lest you update sometime soon. ^-^ So if you would do so quickly, I am sure that I myself, along with all your other captive fans would be, though I hate the over used word, (though I have already used it once)happy, when it appears magicaly before us. *Points inquiring finger* Please me now: Update!

Oh, damn, poor Aang. This is harsh, I'm sad to say I like it... I really hope Aang and Zuko 'll get together though. I donno, I like that pairing.

you should do more...

I feel terrible for Aang but i cant help but be turned on...damnit.

yay aang/zuko!! This is very good and well written! Keep it up and make sure to update soon!!

~cat

Compelling...I love Aang's thought processes...supberb work as always

O_O NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! IT'S A CLIFF-HANGER-THING!

^-^ DUDE! this is so awesome! I honestly think this is the best Avatar fic on here. The characters draw me in, the plot is intoxicating, and the chapters are well written.

kudos!

-IZXSVO