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for Centurion's Revenge

by Horatius314

person samuel adams 17
schedule June 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey man really good story. Please keep up the good work and don't abandon this it would really be a shame. I really enjoyed reading what is there and would love to see more.
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLZ WRITE MORE I LOVE IT
person hmna1227
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and i cant wait for the next chapter. i want to know who the final unit is. Is it shego,tera,youri or some one new. so write the next chapter soon
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NIce story and thanks for telling me about Perfect LIfe.
person Kurama
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Should've seen that coming and yet... I actually didn't. It kept me in suspense to figure out who "Unit 3" could be, I was both shocked, and not, to see it was Bonnie. However, I wonder, who exactly is "Unit 4"? Personally, and this is the guy in me speaking, I'm hoping for another female unit in this 4-man troop formation. However, even if that were true, who could it be? Monique? Shego? Tara? Who in did.
person Ema Nymton
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm hoping Unit 4 is Monique.
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am so looking forward to Bonnie's involvement (as my name probably shows).

Eagerly awaiting more!
person SM
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do wonder who #4 could be. For that matter, how did they all get exposed to the Centurion... I'm glad to see this being updated again. (Something seems to be in the air of late around this part of the site)
person DrD'sLabrat
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Doooooooood!!! That was awesome! You really really need to write more of this story. It looks like its been a few months since you did the first chapter, so you really need to do more. This story rocks. BTW, if you're the same Horatius over at FF.net, this story is gonna kick ass. I didn't like the way 'Second Chances' ended, but you said you'd fix it when you had time, so I'm being patient (The rest of the story is amazing. 'The Rescue' rocks too. Looks like you have some stories to finish. Let me know if I can help. I'll even Beta-read what you've got.
person Mac
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm an avid K/R shipper first off, so this story attracted me right off the bat. I went through all fifty stories and so far only this one has been any good to my mind. I liked the premise you gave. The nanomachine left over seem to be heightening Kim's sexual responses. I can only imagine what Ron will do when Kim shows up at his doorstep. I hope you'll continue this story.