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for Soldier of Fortune

by Florville

person Yhu
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhhh this is a great story so far! Very good character depictions, and rewarding, meaningful interactions between everyone-- I especially feel bad for poor Zim! And GIR too :( :( :( Anyway, keep up the good work ^^
person GothycCoalChambr
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so i'm a Tallest now? kick ass. this story is really good, i don't see why there aren'y many reviews for it. guess they just want yaoi, ne? keep up the good work my Tallest!
person Levi
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THE PLOT THICKENS. Woo. I love this story so much. TOO MUCH IT MAKES ME HAPPY. But anyway, I liked the fifth chapter a lot. I find it really neat that someone who in one fic writes Dib and Zim as TROO LUV'ERS and in another Dib is like. Way too evil. BUT THAT'S OKAY. I'M NOT AN ENORMOUS FAN OF DIB ANYWAYS (although he's sexy*coughcough*) AND SO IT'S K IF HE GETS KILLLLLLED. KILL HIM BADLY. AHAHAHHA. :D Anyway. Keep up the good work, my Tallest.
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oohh.. continue! It's really interesting!
person Krimzon
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I finally gave this a shot and read it. I wasn't meantally prepared for some reason to read it. But now I'm happy I did! Poor, poor Zim. Stupid Dib-shit....grr... Though, how much do you wanna bet that Gir enjoyed being destroyed... XD Random thought from me to you. I'm liking Tak, very much! Keep it up, you beautiful person, you!
person Tamago
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome updatey thingy! I love your stories! YAY! Anyway, I wish I could meet Jhonen...Oh well.
person Yaoifanboy
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Dare I say it? This may be even better than "Vindication"! I think this chapter is absolutely epic, your best work yet!

~Jake
person Melliza
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Daaamn, I hate Tak. And even more than that I hate Tak/Zim. But for some reason, I like this story. Usually the idea of anything Tak makes me wanna cringe but your style of writing is amaaaazing and I love it.. Probably by the 10th chapter of this story I'll be worshipping TakZim stories. You're a great writer.. Also thats so cool that you got an Invader Zim tattoo. Where did you get it at? I want one on my shoulder so bad but I'm afraid that every time I have sex someone will ask me what it means and then I'll have to reveal my passion for Invader Zim, and probably scare away any potential mates..or when I'm 60 I'll have to explain to grandkids why I have some alien drawing on my shoulder. lol. Anyway, awesome story..you should think about writing as a full time career if you arent already...
person GothycCoalChambr
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you got to met the Almighty Creator of IZ? dude you are so lucky! you still haven't said if i could be a Tallest too, lol. another good chapter my Tallest. much lurve to you!
person littleshipper
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah so this is going to be a Zim/Tak fic, huh? I've never been one much for that couple but you just might convert me ;) I like it so far! You're doing a really good job!

And I saw your autograph! LUCKY!!! I envy you so much! Did you get him to sign your tattoo?

Again, great job with the fic and I can't wait til ya update!