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for Soldier of Fortune

by Florville

person Wonders
schedule July 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is truly one of the greatest fanfiction stories I have read in a long while, and it pains me to see that it has been lost in the sands of time. I'm not sure if you check your profile on this site anymore, but I know that I as well as many others strongly urge you to complete this wonderful story.

Regardless of your decision to complete it or not, I wish you well and many more years of fantastic writing =)
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello I am hopeing that I will see more of this story from you soon its just that damn good with this story I say you could do much more even have the irkin armada show up after they fix taks base and even give zim a second another chance at his goal bye unleashing the massives weapons.

I really hope this story will continue I mean I rarely ever see an invader zim story this good out on the web please dont ever end it you could go very far with it.
schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is genius! I love it, please update i need to know whats going to happen!.
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is actually pretty fucking awesome. No updates since 2007 huh? Oh well...
person Does it really matter?
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story! And with that said, much love from one proffesional to another in a proffesional way.
-Author person.
person Kendra Chetnova
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Was that it??!! You sicken me!!! Update this one! It's pretty rare to find anything other than ZADR (which I loathe with a deep-seated passion), and ZATR is my favorite pairing! It can't end there! Please update soon!

P.S. Can I be one of your Tallests, too? OBEY ME!!!






^_^
person Horny Girl
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...WOW...Your story made me wet! My god, the sexual tension building up between Tak and Zim throughout the story was so provocative! You're friggin' awesome!! During the last chapter, my fingers were going where they weren't supposed to...

ANYWHO, on a more literary level, your writing style is amazing. The story was very well excetued. The emotion in your scenes even brought mist to my eyes! You're so far the best author I found on this website. I see you have two other IZ stories too! SQUEEGIE!!! I'm gonna read them...I'll be sure to have my dildo close by next time...

SORRY! I can't help myself! Just curious, is this the end of the story? Or are you writing more? It's still a good way to end it, either way...I'm just dying for some more ZATR goodness and another well-written sex scene!

CIAO!

P.S.

SSSSSEEEEEXXXXXXXX
person Reyku Sama
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Because my beloved co-writer/friend, Ryu was very distressed abaout being fanfiction depraved, I'm replying for her. Speaking for myself, I like what you hve going here on both Seeing Red and Soldier of Fortune...except for the fact that there is not much to read, but thats a good thing. Having alot of good stuff all at once is never a good thing, right? So this is just fine for what you have. I'll be sure to tell Ryu about your novel on DA, just so she isn't always complaining to me about how much she needs to crave her addiction...Speaking for her: "OMG I love this all! Its so great, I just can't stop reading it! (Seeing Red/Soldier of Fortune) Why is it that you must torture me with all your not moreness!? Must have more! Feed me! FEEDME! *Cough* Ok, I'm crazy, don't mind me..." I'm dead serious that she wrote that on a piece of paper for me to type up here...

I am sorry that this has been a very long, and rant-like reply to a chapter that...well, is just an update, but it's all good. I also appologise for my friends absence and very psycho like assest of the situation. I wish you the very best in your writing for all your stories and your novel. Thank you for writing for all of us to enjoy, I'll be waiting for the next update to anyting.

P.S. Ryu is so obsessed with Seeing Red, she's doing a picture for you, from what I understand...So, good luck to you!
person Meee
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want an update on this!!! Pleeeaaaase?!
person Kharn
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
see above. ^_^