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for Momma, I've Been Cryin'

by DarkSeductress

person Satori
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the way u wrote this story an finally u decide 2 update
please update faster than before
keep up the good work
UPDATE ASAP
person Simon_the_duck
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Part two! And now I have to wait anxiously for part three...*grumble* I hope it comes soon. ^^
person Ru-Shin
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^___^ That was great. I can't wait to read the rest~!
person Amarin
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm a sucker for happy endings, but I like realism in my fic, too. This seems very plausible -- that the 'moment after' wouldn't go smoothly, that despite Richie's 'girly' crying, both of them are acting like teenager boys in the land of Denial. I hope to read Virgil's POV soon.
person No Such Thing as Happy Endings*
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo I thought it had something to do with Gundam Waltz.

I like this very much.

*How can it be happy if it's over?
person Satori
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story please keep on going and update ASAP o.k
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo! You're on this site too! Love your story and can't wait until chapter 2 comes up!
person Si
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very sweet. I eagerly await the follow-up.
person Onyxlight
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO very VERY well done I love VR pairings, it's good to see some fics in this category.

I see you are a fan of Maroon5 as well it was a great song for the angst in this fic.

Please continue
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was great! I like the emotional aspect and the fatc that you didn't go overboard with it! Sometimes things do change for the worse when friends try to climb to the highest rung on the ladder. That did not make sense at all, but I'm senseless anyway!