rate_review Reviews

Love it!!!

i'm just now looking at it, but i'd like to see where this goes...

Why yes I do believe you should continue.

Yes you should continue the story. I find it well written. Signed a fan of Kiva.

yeah shouls dude i cant w8 till the next on ekeep it real dude :P

I think you should definitely continue

Awesome Story. Pleeeeeeeze write another chapter to finish the scene.

Ok I love MegasXLR and miss seeing it... If this story was written half as well as it is I would have been happy; You did a great job on this, the characters are how I remember them and the plot, while simple, is good. You do a good job describing the actions and the flow of actions is excellent...
Other than leaving me wanting more, the story is great. Keep up the Great Work!

I personaly think that a Bi should't be femslashing 1 I feel it discriminates us for who we fell like to be it nothing personal of you being Bi I just feel it's just wrong to write a fic like that I have check the ff one and you have no reviews what so ever sorry but people don't like that kind of stuff with such a cool show your going to get bad reviwes REAL bad ones so if ya want to get on the good side of these people who write change the way you write and be very carefull on a postivie side your the second to EVER write one of these but no fans of it will like it if you write boy/girl they seem to be ok someone had tryed a yaoi but he took it off the fans prefer girl/boy just some adivce on I don't want you getting dicriminated becuse of your fanfic and Bi they might think it dosn't make sense soo good luck any way-Angel

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