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November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Too bad that that's all there is.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!PLEASE :)
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was sex-good me and my 5 year old sister love it.(lol she's 25).!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story, please post more chapters as soon as you are able to
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad so far. Chapter two did exactly what you needed it to do, introduce the charcters to the storyline you wanted without going overboard.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey I really do like the story Malachi - keep up the good work!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A good start. All you need to do now is continue. So get back to work and tell the rest of the story.