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for Her Eyes

by noirebony

person Noberu-sama
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, i like it! lol oh ZIM! lol yah its really moody here... lol. the story is good and usualy i only like one-shots ; ) but that was good. the evil teacher is ms bitters. "once i was a fairy princess too. it nwas wonderful, but then it all went wrong..." yeah. i hope you write more soon, and, uhm, yeah. see ya later! : )
person Yaoifanboy
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm not partial to M/F stuff in IZ, ESPECIALLY not OC's, but I'm beginninninninninng to like this ^_^ continue!
person Kharn
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this could end up very nice. Keep going, love i so far!
person yaoifanboy
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...second quickest sex scene I've ever read O_o