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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok last chapter ridiculously short, I like where its going but sheest make the chapters longer.
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was kinda short...but Overall very good
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story line but please keep in mind that writing a story is all about patience...
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story line.
All I could suggest is to make the story a bit more 'padded'. It's not quite that descriptive, and somewhat choppy. It needs to be a little more grabbing.
All I could suggest is to make the story a bit more 'padded'. It's not quite that descriptive, and somewhat choppy. It needs to be a little more grabbing.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:O Holy crap! --Hits [256]-- That's more than I hoped to ever get XD That just shows I'm new to this...TY guys! BTW..For anyone wondering..This story won't be pure sex. It'll have some sex...with details....but it won't be 'Sex sex sex sexity sex sex! Sexity sex sex!'. It'a romance/drama/sci-fi :D Yeah, I think you know that, but whatever...
*dances* O-/< O-|< O-\<
*dances* O-/< O-|< O-\<
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more damnit. NOW!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go for it dude!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a very good start. I can't wait to see what happens next. I look forward to it. Also, if you don't get a lot of comments, don't mind that. Many people may very well like it and just not comment. Out of 1000 views you may get 10 comments so don't be discouraged. Finish the story! :D :D :D :D :D