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Woah! Talk about dark. Good story so far. keep it up.

So...not only have you chosen to write Danny completely out of character, but you've turned him into a Mary Sue-styled superangst character who hates ghosts, yet shows enough compassion to one random hottie ghost enough to keep her alive despite his history? Not to mention Vlad killing Danny's family and friends, which is too blunt, direct and nonsensical (why would he kill Maddie? And he'd sooner make Jazz, Sam and Tucker's lives miserable than kill them entirely). Furthermore, despite the fact that Danny swore never to turn into Dark Danny you're already sending him down that road, and to top it all off you've resorted to the ultimate Ember-related cliche and chose to write about her supposed past life. And to make matters indefinitely worse, your grammatical skills are atrocious.

love what youve started, plz update soon.

I'm no arthur. If you have starcraft battle net you probly seen me. I like your story. Plz update soon.

Please do more soon

Wow. Finally there is a Ember/Danny fic on this place. Any way UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Please update soon

really good
please update soon
and make the chapters twice as long

Excellent story! It is very original and its about time I saw something other than a Danny/Sam pairing! Its not that I hate the pairing its just that I see too many of it. Anyway keep it up! Plz update soon!!!!!!!