rate_review Reviews

Wow...wow.

Woah! You really can write, you're talent is AMAZING. First of all, the desription. Wow, the characters aren't a bit OOC, and you add little tiny hints in the story that make me squeal REVIEW! Second, you have an awesome plot. Jet was one of my most watched shows, and I can see the effort you put into this. (They should put at least part of this in the show.) Third, you have really cool narrating and hang-over-the-edge cliffhangers. I can see why so many people like this!

u said in the very beginning of the story, like in the summary thingy "a 13 year old getting it on with a 15 year old", but how is aang 10 then?

Another excellent chapter, again I love how you potrayed the characters,and the fact that despite the fact that everything's going to get pretty dark and Aang's being unusually possesive, everyone's in character. Keep up the excelent work, I'll be waiting eagerly for an update.
pS. I've been wondering is there going to be smut?

good story! i love the twisting plot line and can't wait to see the next chapter and figure out what the pattern is to titles.

And you add yet another chapter. How do you write so fast and so well? Keep it up, definately.

wow. can i be katara? lol, definately a really good fic you have here. it has the all the right elements: plot, humor, suspense, angst, and smexyness! please update soon!

This is just... wow. I normally like zuko/kat, but this is really great. Please keep writing this and update your inuyasha fics!

Whoa, this is like excellence to the max, I was hooked from the time I read your A/n in the first chapter, I oculd understand how you see the whole Anakin/Padme, thing because if I see that too. It's so rare that you actually see a very well, written fanfic on this site, in a catagory as small as this, it seems to me that everyone is obssesed with either Zuko/Katara (gag me, I mean have the ever said more than six words to each other), or slash, I'm happy to actually find a well written story about a very plausible couple. Keep up the excellence, please don't stop writing.

This is quite good. Definately on par with your other fics. I really liked the background you provided with Aang. Can't wait to see more