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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, I am truly enjoying this piece of fiction you have going here. I've gone through all 6 chapters numerous times now and still haven't tired of it yet. I'm trying to have some patience and be happy with the way the story is unraveling and the interactions between Aang and Katara but you've given us a taste and now I'm just greedy! Greedy I tell you, lol. I'm not looking to have them jump into one another's beds right away but I've enjoyed each of their quiet/touching moments. I look forward to many more.
As for chapter six, I got a good laugh out of Sokka's conversation with Aang. Although I couldn't help but feel sorry for Aang and the choice that was taken from him. From what I could tell, it seemed you were going to have him pursue Katara anyway... despite his vow and past happenings. The love he feels for Katara seems to be that jolt he needs to tap into his other bending abilities. I only hope both Aang and Katara reailze it [though Katara more than Aang ^-^]
Like I said before:
Loved It. Can't Wait For More. Update Soon.
As for chapter six, I got a good laugh out of Sokka's conversation with Aang. Although I couldn't help but feel sorry for Aang and the choice that was taken from him. From what I could tell, it seemed you were going to have him pursue Katara anyway... despite his vow and past happenings. The love he feels for Katara seems to be that jolt he needs to tap into his other bending abilities. I only hope both Aang and Katara reailze it [though Katara more than Aang ^-^]
Like I said before:
Loved It. Can't Wait For More. Update Soon.
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this fiction is beyond amazing. I skimmed the summary and after reading the first chapter squealed happily with joy, lol. There are so very few Katara/Aang fictions and this is probably one of the best ones out there right now. I zipped through all five chapters in one sitting, so you really need to update again soon [even if you updated today ^_^] I loved Aang's reactions to Koru and how Katara attempted to handle them at first. Koru and his girl are nothing but bad news and I hope that you have both Aang and Katara [Sokka of course, also - lol] come out of all of this unscathed or at least as unscathed as possible. Now, as for the last chapter and Aang and Katara's interactions. Whoo, amazing I was so upset when there wasn't anymore of that to read. I'm really enjoying their discovery of one another and the roles each would and hopefully will play in their romantic relationship together.
I like to see that there is more to Aang than this happy-go-lucky kid that has seemingly accepted his fate. It's lovely to see Aang's darker side, which I think a boy/man in his position would totally possess. Aang's possessiveness of Katara seems completely natural and believable. Katara's reactions to all this are really nice as well. I'm interested to see how she handles his not-so-subtle possessiveness in the future, especially since she always seemed to be such an independant young woman. Not to mention Sokka's reaction to everything, I hope he doesn't make things too difficult on them when they finally get together. It seems that they'll have more than enough factors working against them [especially Katara's inner ramblings] without adding Sokka to the mix.
You may or may not do this but if you have a small list of people you notify when updating, I would absolutely LOVE to be on it! If you don't that's cool too. I'll just have to check back every other day [who am I kidding? everyday!] to see if this has been updated. A fabulous beginning, I really can't wait to see what you have happen next. I can only hope that Katara and Aang's relationship progress further with each chapter. [Please let Katara let Aang into her heart ^_^]
New Faithful Reader,
Tygerlily!
I like to see that there is more to Aang than this happy-go-lucky kid that has seemingly accepted his fate. It's lovely to see Aang's darker side, which I think a boy/man in his position would totally possess. Aang's possessiveness of Katara seems completely natural and believable. Katara's reactions to all this are really nice as well. I'm interested to see how she handles his not-so-subtle possessiveness in the future, especially since she always seemed to be such an independant young woman. Not to mention Sokka's reaction to everything, I hope he doesn't make things too difficult on them when they finally get together. It seems that they'll have more than enough factors working against them [especially Katara's inner ramblings] without adding Sokka to the mix.
You may or may not do this but if you have a small list of people you notify when updating, I would absolutely LOVE to be on it! If you don't that's cool too. I'll just have to check back every other day [who am I kidding? everyday!] to see if this has been updated. A fabulous beginning, I really can't wait to see what you have happen next. I can only hope that Katara and Aang's relationship progress further with each chapter. [Please let Katara let Aang into her heart ^_^]
New Faithful Reader,
Tygerlily!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...that was yummy...was hoping for more smuttiness though, lol. Yes I am a perv.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say... I'm speechless; you're writing is absolutely fantastic, but I feel like I've been teased a bit ;). I agree with spleefmistress: bring on the smutty parts (lol). Seriously though, this is a fantastic peice of work. You are a great storyteller!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was another piece of brilliance. I love how you managed to keep Aang's innocence there all the while another, less innocent side of him was explored, I understand and belive Katara's un-willingness to change their realtionship and her confusion with her feeling towards him. This story grows more and more brilliant with each chapter. I love it.
Ps. I also loved the part where she said open your mouth, an dhe did, I nearly fell out of my chair. Keep on writing, there simply aren't anough good stories out there.
Ps. I also loved the part where she said open your mouth, an dhe did, I nearly fell out of my chair. Keep on writing, there simply aren't anough good stories out there.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...i just love how this story is progressing. You really are a top notch author
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is totally awesome, I love it even more with every passing chapter. I think you are keeping everyone in character and weaving a very good plot. Keep up the excellence.
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can I just fangirl you right now? that was soo sweet, omg!!! this is like the best avatar fic ever! i normally read this on ffnet, but think i'm going to come here when things heat up a bit!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that's SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SWEET! *giggles* ^^ update soon! ^^
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Please continue, also please add a lemon soon...