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sweet

very good story but what happened to chapter 10. keep writing more can't wait for more

Woah. Harsh much? I'm loving the story so far. But, no offense but I think Kim is being too... too fragile and clingy. She probably shouldn't go after Shego so much. She should just keep her distance. Play it cool, you know? I know Kim misses her family and friends, but she should know that Shego would never let her contact them. Kim should focus all her emotions on her training. Also, Shego is really mean, which means you captured her personality. Great Job on the story! Please Update it soon! I am dying to know what Kim is getting trained for and what's gonna happen when the three years is up!

shego was so cold.. good chappie tho

That was... Wow. And you do not suck at sex scenes! (They were very VERY good -_^ )... Please update ASAP.

You do NOT do badly with the training AND the sex scenes (wow... ^___^). Anyways, it was kinda funny to see Kim going around being all lustful and jealous. Looking forward to the next update. = )

I'm glad you posted on here. Fanfiction.net are a bit of a prick, aren't they? That was a grate chapter. It feels like something big is going to happen soon. can't wait.

Bad? That was actually pretty good. ive read some pretty bad ones, and that wasnt bad at all. itd be nice if you'd finish it tho :P

This story is so cool.Update Soon

That was an interesting chapter. Not as dark as I was expecting it to be, but definatly interesting. Not so sure the scene was as expressly needed but it is your story and I'll follow it however it turns out. The prospects for the future seem delightful within this story. But what's happened to the rest of the world, that's sparked my curiosity. Keep up the good work.