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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice, cant wait till the next chapter :)
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I look forward to future chapters.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tally_beoulve have you tried to type in your username and password then click login at the bottom of the page.If that doesn't work then I'll tell Triaxx,so he can help you out.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a cool story.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! That's all I have to say...errr and thanks for ending the wait for the next chapter.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This cahpter was awsome, though I wish there was more to it. Not as big of a lemon as I expected but it was great. I really wished they could love each other and not worry about xiao qing. but I'll just have to wait to see wont I?
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't hate you, immo. =P I haven't been able to log on to the KPSlashboards for a while for some reason...it claims I'm already logged on, but it welcomes me as a guest and I can't post. Totally weird. Anyhoo... 'nice day'. Geeze, immo! I like the lull in the tension that was building up. A calm before the storm type of feeling, really. I'm also super happy that Shego has fallen back into that happy place where she can be herself around Kim and not have to worry about Xaio Qing. Blargy snake demoness... she's getting a tad too touchy feely in the flashback scene where she puts her scale on Shego, eh? Not so sisterly now!!! Rawr. Anyhoo. Ima' go see if I can log in now, since it's a different day. Much love, immo!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could you end it like that! I've been waiting what seems like forever.....err you suck. Just kidding.Please write some more of the story. It is great and I've told all of my friends about it and they love it too.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read. The way it was written and the way the characters act seems real. Please write the next chapter quick! This is an awesome story.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* More cliffhangers, immo? Will the suspense never end? ^_^ lol. There were a couple of tense changes that happened...err...somewhere in the beginning of the middle part of the story in the scene with Fong and Shego. Really minor, I just thought I'd mention them for the sake of editing and whatnot, yah? XD
I think it's funny that Xaio Qing would secretly teach Kim an offensive spell, just to irk Shego. That made me laugh, and I just caught it now. XP It's nice to see that Fong and Shego are still harboring emotions from each other (as much as it pains me as a Kigo fan to say so,) since that really strikes home. It's for all the jilted or unrequieted lovers out there, eh, immo? lol. Ahhh...the pain. *sigh*
A scale with Xaio Qing's power... 'until she grows her own'... hmmm. So many thoughts and ideas could come out of this, but I won't say anything here. I'll go and discuss with madman and everyone on the KPslash board.
On a side note, I enjoyed that you took a bit of time to tell us how time worked in the village and on Er Mei, and how doing that inadvertantly shows us a bit more of Xaio Qing's power without slapping us in the face and going 'Hey! She's powerful!' like we didn't know. ^_~ I sat back after reading that part and thought about it, and I was all, 'Wow. She's PRACTICING doing that? Dude...' Makes one wonder how much more Bai Su Zheng could do...
I had a flash of Fruits Basket when Xaio was stepping on the blanket of snakes to go back up to the top of Er Mei, heh heh. Just a bit of imagery that I thought would entertain you if I mentioned it. ^_^
Mmmm...not much else to mention, I think, other than the progression is going steadily; feels like we're setting up for some much bigger surprise now that Xaio is going back and Shego and Kim can have more screen time together *hooray!* And now, we understand why Shego didn't want to let Kim get too close. But...if that's the case, it still leaves the question of how Xaio felt about Fong, since she asked how she was doing all those chapters ago. Was she doing it to mock Shego, or because...of something else? Because Fong is one of hers, I guess, and Kim isn't. But still. 'You will love no other more than I.' Hmmmm. Someone's insecure much... just kidding. O_O;; Possessive, but not insecure. Much. Heh.
Things are going to come to head with Shego's guilt eating away at her, and the tapestry having sapped much of her strength. One wonders if that will be how it is for Kim if things continue on with Xaio Qing the way they are. Will Kim be following in Shego's footsteps? Or will Kim be headstrong and heroic and attempt to...err...do something heroic? That, or try to get 'closer' to Shego again, now that an overbearing someone is hibernating again... Well. Maybe not. Kim did give her word. But... what means more to her? Her word or her heart? Shego's having the same issues... so... I'm just wondering out loud in your review now. Blarg. Well...fun stuff and joyful things, immo. As ever, always looking forward to your next updates. Much love!
I think it's funny that Xaio Qing would secretly teach Kim an offensive spell, just to irk Shego. That made me laugh, and I just caught it now. XP It's nice to see that Fong and Shego are still harboring emotions from each other (as much as it pains me as a Kigo fan to say so,) since that really strikes home. It's for all the jilted or unrequieted lovers out there, eh, immo? lol. Ahhh...the pain. *sigh*
A scale with Xaio Qing's power... 'until she grows her own'... hmmm. So many thoughts and ideas could come out of this, but I won't say anything here. I'll go and discuss with madman and everyone on the KPslash board.
On a side note, I enjoyed that you took a bit of time to tell us how time worked in the village and on Er Mei, and how doing that inadvertantly shows us a bit more of Xaio Qing's power without slapping us in the face and going 'Hey! She's powerful!' like we didn't know. ^_~ I sat back after reading that part and thought about it, and I was all, 'Wow. She's PRACTICING doing that? Dude...' Makes one wonder how much more Bai Su Zheng could do...
I had a flash of Fruits Basket when Xaio was stepping on the blanket of snakes to go back up to the top of Er Mei, heh heh. Just a bit of imagery that I thought would entertain you if I mentioned it. ^_^
Mmmm...not much else to mention, I think, other than the progression is going steadily; feels like we're setting up for some much bigger surprise now that Xaio is going back and Shego and Kim can have more screen time together *hooray!* And now, we understand why Shego didn't want to let Kim get too close. But...if that's the case, it still leaves the question of how Xaio felt about Fong, since she asked how she was doing all those chapters ago. Was she doing it to mock Shego, or because...of something else? Because Fong is one of hers, I guess, and Kim isn't. But still. 'You will love no other more than I.' Hmmmm. Someone's insecure much... just kidding. O_O;; Possessive, but not insecure. Much. Heh.
Things are going to come to head with Shego's guilt eating away at her, and the tapestry having sapped much of her strength. One wonders if that will be how it is for Kim if things continue on with Xaio Qing the way they are. Will Kim be following in Shego's footsteps? Or will Kim be headstrong and heroic and attempt to...err...do something heroic? That, or try to get 'closer' to Shego again, now that an overbearing someone is hibernating again... Well. Maybe not. Kim did give her word. But... what means more to her? Her word or her heart? Shego's having the same issues... so... I'm just wondering out loud in your review now. Blarg. Well...fun stuff and joyful things, immo. As ever, always looking forward to your next updates. Much love!