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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First off, all I would like to say congradulations on another great chapter of this great fan fiction. Now I want to apologize to you... this review is going to be very long. Sorry. Sorry Again...
OK. New first off. NO, we don't want the story to rush to an end! We have all ready said this to you on more than one occation. This is a very, very good story that has captured the attention of damn near every one out there that reads Kim Possible fan fiction and we actually don't mind the fact that the story keeps on barreling forward. We just hate having to wait for the next chapter to come out so that we can get our fix of the newest chapter of 'A Few New Tricks', immo. Every time we sign on to AFF and find out that the newest chapter is up our imagination kicks into overdrive and we are taken back to the world that you have created for all of the Kim Possible crew members. Even if a person isn't a fan of the series this story is good enough to stand on its own but, the fact that you have fabricated such an enthralling tale for our most adored television characters and plausably depicted a senarrio in which we can get action, adventure, romance, comedy, tragedy, educational, and all of that KIGOy goodness that got us hooked in the first place has made this story a must read for all of us fans out here. I'm not sayin' your story is perfect, but it is pretty damn close for a fan fictin and has a massive fan base following that will probably be sad when it is finally over with. One thing about your story that I will say that does bother me a little is the fact that Ron, even though I know that for the purpose of this story he is a very minor character and that a lot of people don't seem to like him very much, I do think that he has been a bit to out of character during the course of this story for my likings. Yes, Ron is a buffoon and yes, Ron is afraid of damn near every thing out there in the world and yes, he does spaz out way too much on the show to be taken seriously by pretty much any of the villinous population other than Gill and Monkey Fist, but the kid wouldn't be as tame as he is in this story. I very much doubt that he would take such a lax aprouch to Team Possible and I know he wouldn't put up with Jim's attitude towards him. I also doubt that his skills would fall so far behind in there developement, especially with Kim disapperring on him and then him finding out that she had been kidnapped by Shego. He has always been very protective of Kim on the show, so it would only follow suit that he would try to improve so as to be able to help Kim escape. But hey, it's your great story and we'll all read it anyway so it don' matter. I just review because I care about the story and want to see it come out to be the best that it can be. Still, you are doing a fabulous job with it and I hope to see another great chapter some time in the near future.
Oops! Damn again. This is a lot longer than I originally meant to write for this. Sorry AGAIN for the long review. I didn't mean for it to be QUITE this long but it just happened to come out that way. ANyways, please update soon.
Sincerely,
MySweetOblivion_On_P.G.
OK. New first off. NO, we don't want the story to rush to an end! We have all ready said this to you on more than one occation. This is a very, very good story that has captured the attention of damn near every one out there that reads Kim Possible fan fiction and we actually don't mind the fact that the story keeps on barreling forward. We just hate having to wait for the next chapter to come out so that we can get our fix of the newest chapter of 'A Few New Tricks', immo. Every time we sign on to AFF and find out that the newest chapter is up our imagination kicks into overdrive and we are taken back to the world that you have created for all of the Kim Possible crew members. Even if a person isn't a fan of the series this story is good enough to stand on its own but, the fact that you have fabricated such an enthralling tale for our most adored television characters and plausably depicted a senarrio in which we can get action, adventure, romance, comedy, tragedy, educational, and all of that KIGOy goodness that got us hooked in the first place has made this story a must read for all of us fans out here. I'm not sayin' your story is perfect, but it is pretty damn close for a fan fictin and has a massive fan base following that will probably be sad when it is finally over with. One thing about your story that I will say that does bother me a little is the fact that Ron, even though I know that for the purpose of this story he is a very minor character and that a lot of people don't seem to like him very much, I do think that he has been a bit to out of character during the course of this story for my likings. Yes, Ron is a buffoon and yes, Ron is afraid of damn near every thing out there in the world and yes, he does spaz out way too much on the show to be taken seriously by pretty much any of the villinous population other than Gill and Monkey Fist, but the kid wouldn't be as tame as he is in this story. I very much doubt that he would take such a lax aprouch to Team Possible and I know he wouldn't put up with Jim's attitude towards him. I also doubt that his skills would fall so far behind in there developement, especially with Kim disapperring on him and then him finding out that she had been kidnapped by Shego. He has always been very protective of Kim on the show, so it would only follow suit that he would try to improve so as to be able to help Kim escape. But hey, it's your great story and we'll all read it anyway so it don' matter. I just review because I care about the story and want to see it come out to be the best that it can be. Still, you are doing a fabulous job with it and I hope to see another great chapter some time in the near future.
Oops! Damn again. This is a lot longer than I originally meant to write for this. Sorry AGAIN for the long review. I didn't mean for it to be QUITE this long but it just happened to come out that way. ANyways, please update soon.
Sincerely,
MySweetOblivion_On_P.G.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this fanfic is fucking awesom i recomend this to everyone
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IMMO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I haven't been online in ages, and then I almost freaked out because I thought you'd added like, tons of chapters without me reading, and then I'd have to catch up and junk and I'd be all sorts of sad. This chapter seemed relatively shorter than the other ones... didn't rush it, did you? =P It's great to hear that you've started chapter 28 and have 27 all done... before you get mauled by rabid fans foaming at the mouth because you didn't update, you should probably put it up here. ^_~ You know. Just for me, if you still love me and such. XD In a nonsexual way of course...
In other happy notes...
BIRDIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! You just have to go and carry on and show me a tiny cameo of the birdie and that's it.... *sigh* Sometimes you make me sad... but not that much. ^_^ I'm happy we got to see him. Fun fun. Ummmm... I don't know why, but this chapter feels a little...bland. Not quite sure why. Building up tension and such, but, it doesn't quite feel like it's at the breaking point yet. Hmmmm. I don't know. Maybe I'm just thrown off by the fact that Shego is completely somewhere else away from Kim, and there is a deep and empty hole where my heart once was because my heart goes with them wherever they go. Possibly. Perhaps.
Meantime...ummm... I hope you had awesome holidays and a good new year's and such, and didn't get burnt out from working like I did. Oh, and I hope you got what you wanted for Christmas. That's very important. You should always have those. *nodnod* Anyhoo. I'm going to go work on my story that I haven't written in forever, ever since I ended up working 40 hours for a seasonal job.... ^_^;;; so, yesh. That, and I'm going to go look for neat R.O.D. the T.V. fics, that are hopefully well done. But I probably won't find any, and have to go work on my story. Eeeesh. Anyhoo.... as ever and always, waiting for your next update, immo. ^_~ Much love!!
In other happy notes...
BIRDIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! You just have to go and carry on and show me a tiny cameo of the birdie and that's it.... *sigh* Sometimes you make me sad... but not that much. ^_^ I'm happy we got to see him. Fun fun. Ummmm... I don't know why, but this chapter feels a little...bland. Not quite sure why. Building up tension and such, but, it doesn't quite feel like it's at the breaking point yet. Hmmmm. I don't know. Maybe I'm just thrown off by the fact that Shego is completely somewhere else away from Kim, and there is a deep and empty hole where my heart once was because my heart goes with them wherever they go. Possibly. Perhaps.
Meantime...ummm... I hope you had awesome holidays and a good new year's and such, and didn't get burnt out from working like I did. Oh, and I hope you got what you wanted for Christmas. That's very important. You should always have those. *nodnod* Anyhoo. I'm going to go work on my story that I haven't written in forever, ever since I ended up working 40 hours for a seasonal job.... ^_^;;; so, yesh. That, and I'm going to go look for neat R.O.D. the T.V. fics, that are hopefully well done. But I probably won't find any, and have to go work on my story. Eeeesh. Anyhoo.... as ever and always, waiting for your next update, immo. ^_~ Much love!!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I'll admit it. I've never watched an episode of Kim Possible in my life.
It says something about your work that it's interesting enough to keep someone with no knowledge of the show or fandom reading it from start to finish. Good job. ^.^_b
It says something about your work that it's interesting enough to keep someone with no knowledge of the show or fandom reading it from start to finish. Good job. ^.^_b
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
meaningless fluff?? Heathen. sorry love a little fluff here and there breaks up the angsty stuff in everything. Even I have to put some in my fics every now and then.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There is so nothing wrong with meaningless fluff! And, if like me, other readers are hopeless romantics and delight in the joy of tiny touches and random affection, then there is so totally no such thing as meaningless fluff. In fact, that phrase shouldn't even be uttered to the ears of a romantic. ^_~ No fluff is meaningless, immo! I was all warm and fuzzy from start to finish of this chapter. I so love this story. It will be a bitter sweet feeling when it draws to a close, but all good things and all that jazz. XD Anyhoo. There weren't too many spelling errors, I actually only caught three in my avid reading and was lost in the story, being able to perfectly put myself in the story and see everything in my mind's eye. They are as follows: early in the chapter, right after Shego has knocked Kim into the snow, there is a sentence 'Snow feel gently...' instead of 'fell'. Um... I forgot the second one... dammit... and the third one I caught was when Fong was with her baby at dinner, right before the scene break, the word was 'endulging' instead of 'indulging'. And because I'm hard-pressed for time right now and must go forage for dinner before going to work, this is all I can currently write. ^_~ I'm sure anyone else that reads your comments aside from you are probably happy about that, as I tend to talk too much, right? XD lol. Anyhoo! Much love and no ending prematurely, immo! You'd make me sad for weeks. *nodnod* See you laters!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Sorry,.....It just seems like so long since you written. This chapter was Awesome!
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot, immo. ^_~ Very nice chapter, blends everything well, I think. I was wondering how you were going to deal with the barrier and the team, but the point of view from Tigger was a really nice touch. I enjoyed that Rufus and Tigger could see the barrier and pass through it, while to the humans, it was just like the animals disappeared. Take that, technology! Muahaha! Thinking technology can outdo magic...especially centuries old snake demoness magic! Hah!
Anyhoo... yayness for the togetherness of Kim and Shego once more. I'm sure we can all figure out the 'main reason' why Shego doesn't want even rumors of she and Kim spreading around. O_O Foreshadowing, foreshadowing!
Also...I got confused. Xian he.... is the mythical bird I've been bugging you about, isn't it? Has he always had a name, and I just missed it in the previous chapters? Last time I checked, we were still referring to him as 'the mythical bird', lol. But yay. If he is, and that's what we're talking about, then Kim noticed him and wants to see him as badly as I do. 'Childish wants' and all that jazz. ^_~
Forgive me, for it is early for me and I had a stick of string cheese for breakfast and nothing else.
Drakken's jokes...amoeba... nice quirky touch in reminding us that yes, even though he works for the side of good now, he is still a doofus. Heh. ^_^;;
One minor thing... I thought Tigger was a really huge German Shepherd, capable of rescuing small children. Doesn't that mean he's...bigger than a puppy? Or does Jim just refer to him as a puppy because he raised Tigger from a puppy? I was slightly confused about that. Puppy, or adult? I have no idea. Totally very minor in the great scheme of things, I just thought the confusion would be a good change of pace from abject and total worship. ^_~
Ahhh... the tapestry revealed. You have revealed to us two very important things: one, that whatever Xaio Qing is taking from Shego to help make the tapestry, she is not per se pulling scales from Shego's back to make them; and two, that of course we were going to see some incarnation of the lost Black Snake (or White Snake, in the story links you've sent us...o_O;;) in some form or another. The question is: what is the tapestry, and why does Shego feel that it is a desert that will swallow them up? Ah, the questions we must ask ourselves....
I doth believe that is it for the current moment. Always much love and anticipation for your chapters, immo! Fun stuff!
Anyhoo... yayness for the togetherness of Kim and Shego once more. I'm sure we can all figure out the 'main reason' why Shego doesn't want even rumors of she and Kim spreading around. O_O Foreshadowing, foreshadowing!
Also...I got confused. Xian he.... is the mythical bird I've been bugging you about, isn't it? Has he always had a name, and I just missed it in the previous chapters? Last time I checked, we were still referring to him as 'the mythical bird', lol. But yay. If he is, and that's what we're talking about, then Kim noticed him and wants to see him as badly as I do. 'Childish wants' and all that jazz. ^_~
Forgive me, for it is early for me and I had a stick of string cheese for breakfast and nothing else.
Drakken's jokes...amoeba... nice quirky touch in reminding us that yes, even though he works for the side of good now, he is still a doofus. Heh. ^_^;;
One minor thing... I thought Tigger was a really huge German Shepherd, capable of rescuing small children. Doesn't that mean he's...bigger than a puppy? Or does Jim just refer to him as a puppy because he raised Tigger from a puppy? I was slightly confused about that. Puppy, or adult? I have no idea. Totally very minor in the great scheme of things, I just thought the confusion would be a good change of pace from abject and total worship. ^_~
Ahhh... the tapestry revealed. You have revealed to us two very important things: one, that whatever Xaio Qing is taking from Shego to help make the tapestry, she is not per se pulling scales from Shego's back to make them; and two, that of course we were going to see some incarnation of the lost Black Snake (or White Snake, in the story links you've sent us...o_O;;) in some form or another. The question is: what is the tapestry, and why does Shego feel that it is a desert that will swallow them up? Ah, the questions we must ask ourselves....
I doth believe that is it for the current moment. Always much love and anticipation for your chapters, immo! Fun stuff!