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I was just curious why you left out To Become A Snake which you have as Chapter 29 at a different location!!!

wow didnt expect such a sad and depressing ending. :C poor kim and shego and the other woman. well it was well writen and i liked the story. too bad about the terribly sad ending though

this is one of the first kigo fics i ever read and i just happen to be wandering around bored and i saw it was updated. I love the way you brought everything back to gether all i can say is the ending hurt. i want to now how that last fight turns out. And i really feel for Kim. Loved the story later

Yay! Fantastic continuation of a great KiGo tale!
Love,
Heather and Anna

That's not the final chapter, is it? There's going to be more. Right? Right? ;_;

this is gr8!!!! couldnt stop readin, cant wait 4 da nxt chapter!!!

Please, Please write somemore. This story is completly awesome and I can't stand not knowing how it ends.

I started reading this fic today, but couldn't tear my eyes away. I was very dissapointed when I had to go eat. An internal battle consisting basically of, "need food. but need pretty story. NEED FOOD."
I eventually realized that it was better to go ahead and eat, as I wasn't getting much from the story at that point. xD
Anyway. You had me hooked at the first chapter, and I can't wait for there to be more.
Shego's so cool, you just can't deny it. But can be cold, and you've portrayed it well. (though, truthfully, i usually can't get enough fluff.)

One last thing, before I... stop writing? I have a habit of reading the chapter titles when I begin the story. Don't know why, just do. And from the beginning, I was fangirling over "Goodbye, Love". I wasn't certain if it had anything to do with Rent at the time. But cool.

And now I'm rambling. So I'll shut up.
:D
Again, I can't wait for there to be more, thanks for writing it.

Ah.... Rent. The voices were so much better in the movie than the broadway soundtrack. In my opinion, anyway. *nodnod* I love Mimi as well. As should we all. Muahaha. Mmmm. I'm happy that you mentioned the little battle for supremacy between Shego and Kim... at first I was wondering if I'd missed something in a previous chapter because I was like "Shego's what? Kim's going where? What's going ON??" but, no, you fixed it, and it was gooder. I'm still sad about the entire thing, and await anxiously for the next chapter.
Btw, you changed tenses at least once in the beginning of the chapter. I forget exactly where because I'm distracted....anyhoo. SHEGO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I had to let that out. Sorry. Mmmmm. I wonder if Kim will figure things out. And what about the spell Shego cast on Kim's eyes. Oooh, cataracts? As in, make Kim blind cataracts? That might...ummm... need to be worded differently. Maybe. Possibly. I don't know. Anyhoo. I'm getting yelled at, so.... IMMO!!!!!!! Much love and anticipation for the next chapters! Much love!!!!!!!

OH MY GOD!!! That was good but........oh my God. I need the next chapter. Dang........