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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've literally become on the edge of my seat because of this story. It's a bit strange picturing Dib as such a cold hearted person to the point that he would not even care about the death of his sister let alone be involved, but at the same time in all reality I could have seen it happen. I myself couldn't go through half the ridicule he goes through in a week tops.
It's so nice how quick you go through to get these chapters out to us, you're a very devoted author :)
P.S. - Sorry for any spelling errors, i'm about to drop dead asleep at the moment.
It's so nice how quick you go through to get these chapters out to us, you're a very devoted author :)
P.S. - Sorry for any spelling errors, i'm about to drop dead asleep at the moment.
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is fabulous! intriguing. ^.^ you simply MUST continue it. it's also very well thought-out, too.
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sad to hear you are being treated so wrong, but I know exactly how you feel being as my dad treats me exactly the same. I hope things start going well for you.
Thank you for the hard work you do for us on this story. :)
Thank you for the hard work you do for us on this story. :)
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such....short...chapters...but they're soooo goood! I never thought that Dib would impersonate his dad! I was a little surprised at that little development. And I'm glad I could hit the proverbial head *perverted snicker*
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I probably just forgot about it then ^^; Again with the horribly short chapterness! >< I'm assuming Dib's already taken the vaccine/antedote for the virus? And why must you use the word 'tentacles' so often?! Don't you know he uses metal 'spider legs'?! Don't you know how filthy my mind got reading the word 'tentacles' so many times!? Ah, but that was probably your intention anyway, wasn't it? A prelude to tentacle rape in future chapters! XD
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that this story is amazing! I've been reading it since the beginning. I just haven't reviewed (Sorry, I'm bad about that) But I am now! lol I really love this story and how fast you update it. Keep up the great work!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD damn, i expected to get on this morning and see yet another new chappie!! Oh well... since I didn't get to review last time, I'll say it now: THIS FIC RULES!!! I'd love to imagine Dib and Zim in a tub together *drool*. This fic is very original, haven't seen anything like it before. You've managed to create a romance, while still keeping the characters in character!!! w007 para ti!! I looooooooooove this fic!! KEEP WRITING!! XD
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'The day the mission fails is the day it stops'? Is Dib planning on killing himself? Oo; And since when did he have a tattoo? You'd think the way Zim monitors his every move, he wouldn't have time to sneak into a tattoo parlor. Hehe, and it looks like Zim might change his mind about letting Dib take a gel bath after all... >;D
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
2 chapters in one day? wow, you really are a chapter machine. keep up the good work.
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What exactly happened to Gaz, though? It's a tad jarring to have that gap in time, there. Shall we assume she's dead? o_o Or did I overlook something?
HURRY UP MORE SEX! XD
HURRY UP MORE SEX! XD