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This chapter was one of your best, I always find the chapters where the development of growing feelings(if it can be put that way) are where authors put their best work in the stories. I saw it in this chapter and it had me holding my breath the entire way through.

It's good to know our reviews make you feel so much better :)

Ooh, I like! I've been on Vacation, so I was welmed with updates. YAY! I love updates! They make me feel all warm inside. :D please, keep those updates rolling in!

ANOTHER triple chapter whammy! You ARE a chapter generating machine! Not that that's a bad thing! XD Oooh, I loved that little tense Zim/Dib moment with Dib getting all melty in his arms! ;d And letting Gir watch turned out to bite their little egos after all! But that came out of the blue, didn't it? Was he watching his little homemade porn while they were watching the downfall of humanity? Ah, to each his own! I wonder if they'll oblige the little robot's request...without him knowing about it of course! Well, now that the disease is spreading, what's there left for those two to do? Conquering humanity wise I mean?

I want to say this, not many authors do chapters souly based on something that has happened outside of the characters they are focused on, especially if it is just something like let's say an article. I myself am glad you take this attempt because it let's us focus on what's going on outside of the story. Most of us have alot of unanswered questions and when you make chapters such as the two you just did, it actually helps alot and is a very nice change from the norm.

You know me, i'll be waiting for the next chapter :)

I had checked your story in the morning just to see if you had posted another chapter... you hadn't, apparently, and when I pushed the back button A NEW CHAPPIE WAS UP!! XD I swear, you are a chapter machine. God, I love this chapter so much... I was absolutely laughing my ass off at the incident with GIR:

GIR giggled, pulling a surveillance disk out of his head and running over to one of the monitors, plugging it in. The other monitors cut out, and the main screen lit up with a recording of Dib sucking on Zim’s antennae, stroking him under his boxers.

Dib and Zim immediately blushed.

“Do THAT again!” GIR giggled, pointing at the screen.

XD BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH!!!! That's so priceless!!! Anyway... I've never seen the movie of "The Stand" but the book by Stephen King is incredibly good. Albeit, long, you should read it, you'd probably enjoy it. Once again, another great chapter from Florville! You absolutely must continue this story!!!!!

~Jake

*happy sigh* You have no idea how happy you've made me by updating so frequently. However, I want to point out that I nearly died of shock from realizing I'd been away from AFF for a week and suddenly I was 9 chapters behind... It was strange. Better than waiting for months on end though! Now I'm supposed to explain just how much I love this story, but I seem to be incapable of expressing that in the words of the english language... By the way, if the press really beleives something that bad was a mistake, every single writer/reporter for that paper/program should be shot dead this instant. So, if that's the general idea you wanted to get accross, congratulations! If not... Well, congratulations anyway, 'cause you got me to reveiw and actually leave behind proof that I visit this site.
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Kayu

This chapter made me feel a little sad...in a good way. Poor Dib, he's on a little emotional roller coaster, isn't he? And Zim, he just doesn't know *what* the hell is going on. Ahh, the joys of angst. And silly Gir, he recorded their little...*incident*, lol!

YAY!!! NEXT CHAPTER IS TEH DEDICATED TO ME!!! *does a little dance*

Wow!!! I didn't know signing reviews got me such special priveleges!! XD I feel so special, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!!!

Well, quite honestly... Chapter 21 was... odd... but I supposed it fit the story a bit, and added almost a little break from the norm, which is very nice.

I wanna see more ZADR slashy action!!! I need my fix for the week!!!! please?

~Jake

*reads hellsoldier's review* YES! Goddess Rising owns us all!! Bask in it's almighty, smutty, dramatic glory!!! I love that story!

Aaaaaaaaaaaaanyway..

ANOTHER NEW CHAPTER!! JEEZ!!! ^_^; I wish I was that fast with my stories! Dibbles has gotta be careful now! Once it's spread from person to person, he could catch it! Don't let the Dib-worm catch the virus!!! I'll cry if he does!!! ;_;

Yeah, I think I can possibly explain this, florville. Anyway, andalite-bandit, I think what Dib is saying is that the whole point of him joining up with Zim was to achieve revenge against the mankind who shunned him and tormented him his whole life. This is, essentially, his reason for staying alive now. So, if this fails, he has no reason to live anymore...And yeah, it is kind of a symptom of manic-depressive illness. I hope that explains things the right way! ^_^ Or that it at least is adequate, florville!

I happen to like this new chapter bunches, by the way. What has Zim got going on in his AMAZING brain? Well, I guess I have to wait to find out, don't I?