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by Florville

person Blackrose451
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps* I really loved it! Lots of short chaps though... *sigh* Man this is my first Invader Zim Story and hehehehehe I've grown to love. Please update when you can! YAOI/SLASH ALL THE WAY!
person Yaoifanboy
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, the death and destruction. It brings tears of joy to my eyes, just watching Dib killing people mercillessly with Zim.

Great chapter, once again! I love ALL of the chapters you have put out! You must continue this still, or I'll DIE!! ^_^; Don't let me die, that would be sad.

~Jake
person Kayu Silver
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YESSS! Blow those Assosiated Press imbeciles to smithereens! Whooo! *dances* Ahem. Sorry, but the joy of the IZ-universe's general populace being decimated due to their own stupidity amuses me. *grin* Not to mention, I have a dedicated chapter! This is the only chapter dedicated to me that I know of in existance. Which may or may not explain the hyper joyfulness. So far I still love it! This would go on my favorites list if I had one... Maybe I'll make one, just so I can put it there! Aaaand, there were only two new chapters when I showed up again. That's weirdly comforting...

I'd say I can't wait but I probably won't have to wait anyway,

Kayu
person BurningSilence
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOORAY FOR GRAPHIC INTERSPECIES BOY-LUVIN!!! I loved it! I loved it goooood! And if they're going to rule the planet, I don't think they'll need to BUY Dib a new System of a Down T-Shirt...lol
person Insanity
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is what awaits me right before I got to bed. I love you for this, may I just say that? See, if we are all patient enough you deliver one of the best lemon scenes i've read. Zim's clueness at certain moments was a bit cute I might add. Lovely chapter overall. :)
person hellsoldier (too lazy to log in)
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its a good story!! like i always sayyy keep writing it. and the short chapters add alot of drama. i like that. buuutttt... i still think it needs more yaoi.. *dont ask* but keep writing it the way you want to, dont listen to me!! *im an idiot!!!*
person Insanity
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, once again things are really starting to unfold and once again you leave me on the edge of my seat which I adore about you. The short chapters leave me wanting more in a great way. It leaves me feeling giddy(if you will) about wanting to read your story even more the following day, especially with lets say a chapter such as this.

Glad to know the feedback helps the story :)
person GothycCoalChambr
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, more chapters! everytime i check this site there's more for this story. good going! man, Dib sure is evil in this one. I like the evil Dib. keep up the good work!
person andalitebandit_6
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, you're gonna hook us up another fix soon?! Can't wait! ;D Eww, dead bodies Xp And damn your short chapters! >< More soon! :D
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bows to Hellsoldier and YaoiFanboy* Thank you for the kind words about my story XD Good thing I love this one so much or I never would have read them ;P

I'm still trying to get used to the ultra-short chapters but I like how the story is going. Great pacing and yay for devastation :O