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for VINDICATION

by Florville

person Invader Spork
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another fine chapter Earth-thing. Keep writing or feel my wrath! My SQUIRRELY WRATH!
person Insanity
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel honered that you want to dedicate a chapter to me *smiles* I'm happy to be a part of this wonderful story, it's been progressing very nicely. The lyrics to that song in this chapter were great, suddenly I myself want to listen to that song. :)
person Megami
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay for characterization! And smut!

I agree that there needs to be buttsex soon ;P Yesss. And maybe less bloodiness during ^_^;
person Yaoifanboy
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOO!!! Yay! I've gotten my fix for now... That chapter ruled!!! GIR, as always, was completely in character, and absolutely hillarious throughout this scene!! Ah, yes... the insanely good smutty-ness of it all! I like the very graphic-ness of this chapter, and if you don't mind my vulgarity (I'm sure you don't right now, anyway ;) ) I hope that you write some actual Zim on Dib action!! (Just straight up sex, rather than foreplay!) Ah yes, I absolutely adore this story... you keep the characters as they always were... it makes me so surprised that the story can even progress like that! But you seem to pull it off! CONTINUE!!!

P.S. - You didn't dedicate chapter 23 to me like you said you would!! :(

~Jake
person andalitebandit-6
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When life gives you lemons I say horray for smut! XD Oh, but this was good! With Zim continuously missinterpreting Dib's horniness and such. Is he going to REGRET this again? >< Meh, glad to see Gir's a little ZADR fan too!
person hellsoldier (too lazy to log in)
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i never log in. lol. well yes!! i love-ded the yaoi!!! yay!! i love you!!! i loooovveee youuuuu!!! you need to make this a really good long story, oh pplleeaassee dont get bored with this story!! i check it like everyday for updates!!
person Invader Spork
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more! Awesome story, most definitely awesome.
person littleshipper
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!! I loved it! XD I've had such a good day today, and this was just the icing on the cake. I'd also like to say that even though I've been impatiently waiting for more smut, I like how you space it out. I like how the story has a plot. It keeps people interested and builds up anticipation. Plus, when you don't have a sex scene in every chapter, it makes it all the more enjoyable when you decide to write one. Keep up the great work!!
person Insanity
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're welcome. It was nice to be able to see the damage that had been done. I also love what you called the prime minister and pope, because it just seems like something Jhonen would have done.

Be waiting for the next chapter :)
person andalitebandit_6
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happened to Zim regretting letting Dib get intimate with him? What's with the sudden lying down on his lap and letting the human fondle his antennae? Not that I'm complaining, just wondering if I missed something...cool, we got 4 pages coming after this?! Can't wait!