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by Florville

person Insanity
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad that I can pick up on how you write *smiles* I love the names you came up with for the people in this chapter, admist all the chaos in it, I had a good laugh. You seem to know alot about how radar and other such things work, of course from what you told us about your job so far i'm guessing you have to. It seems it's aided you alot in this story. Can't wait to see what happens to Zim and Dib concerning the missles next chapter.
person Yaoifanboy
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... you know... I just re-read your entire story today and yesterday... the plot has warped to an insane destination, and I LOVE IT!! To think, this all started with Dib's contemplated suicide... and it ended up being an alliance between Zim and Dib. This story is still amazing as ever.

I love your story, and you're just so very cool. I love you to deth, but if you don't keep writing, I'll have to kill you ^_^

~Jake
person hellsoldier (too lazy to log in)
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww i am your 101 reviewer!!! ((how many times HAVE i reviewed this story?!?!)) thankies for dedicating the chapter to meeee... ((gleeness!!)) o_O awww!!! its getting yummy, you need to finish!!!
person andalitebandit_6
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, lucky me! I just LEFT the armed forces! Well, maybe not, because now I don't have a gas mask...oh well.
What DID Dib mean saying 'strong five'? Is it a random code name he made up for Zim? Does it have some hidden meaning or special significance? Or am I reading too much into things?
person BurningSilence
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh, I'm starting to feel suspense! I have enjoyed your previous chapters IMMENSLEY! I need to know what happens, or I'll go insane! And we wouldn't want a manic-depressive girl going insane! Now would we?

but in all seriousness...well, some seriousness...

This is one of my favourite stories now! I love evil Dib, and I love a dominating Zim! I honestly just don't see Zim as being submissive. He's too much of an egomaniac. And Gir is always awesome, and the fact that he likes ZADR as much as we all do makes him even more awesome.

I eagerly await your next chapter!

*BurningSilence*
person Invader Spork
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amusing names for the people in this chapter, can't wait to see what happens now that Zim and Dib are spotted.
But be warned, my army of squirrels is waiting in case you do not deliver on the next chapter.
person hellsoldier (too lazy to log in)
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeeee!! gleeness!! i feel soo looovveeddd!!! *does happy dance* you better never get bored of it!! your a really good writer!!! *i write too..but im too lazy to post any of it-note no storys published* im dying to know the rest of the story!!
person GothycCoalChambr
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, more chapters! keep them coming. this is by far my fave IZ story on here and one of my faves over all. and there's at least one new chapter everyday, can't beat that. i'm planning on seeing if you have any other stories on here as well. and if there's any you'd recommend to read, please feel free to drop me an email with a list of them. and if you ever need someone to beta a chapter or 2 for you, i'm always willing to do some beta work.
person pry
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aawwwww i think im gonna cry cause thats all tehre is!! XD very great work!!!! (sniffels) awwww when do u generally post chapters in? I think this fic is probably my favorite out of all the ones ive read so far-id defianly love to do fanart for u-my deviant art site is http://pryanima.deviantart.com so u can check that out so u can see what i can do (most stuff im pretty good with so i should be able to pull it off -whatever u ask for-u can send ur requests to pryanima@comcast.net lol awwww!!! im put out now! i want more chapters XD heeeee and i know i should never bug the author so ill just say i hope for more Zim./dib goodyess and mabey some love in later chapters cause u just do an awesome job writing it ...plus hate to give u ideas but is Zim or Dib gonna get nearly dead in the next few chapers cuase as long as they lived and had the mushy smut-id be happy ^_^
person Dimitri Aidan
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm...wow. So I read up to chapter 13 a week or two ago but was in a hurry and didn't review, figuring I'd be back and maybe find a new chapter or two waiting and then leave you all sorts of fantastical praise, as you so obvioiusly are deserving of but...you know, damn! 14 chapters? I'm like...in awe, of your updating ability. If I can update something every two weeks consistantly I feel really good about myself, but you...you are my new God(dess) and...yes. This story is too awesome and I can see Dib going all homicidal insane, considering he isn't all there to begin with and a human can only take so many people looking down on him before going a little whacky. Plus, when one consideres what else has come form the mind of the IZ creator insane characters seem par for the course. *pets JtHM comics happily*


Uh...I think I was going somewhre with this. I forget though. Give me more please? *puppy eyes*