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*Cheers*

I like you. You're one of those authors who updates frequently. *grins*

I have to say that I'm floored by the dedication and very touched. Thank you. And what a lovely, (if teasing) chapter that was. Though, some action is always welcome, I like how you've made it realistic. For example: They're not Always in the mood, and I can't say I blame Zim. I wouldn't be too keen to hop into bed if my pak was broken...despite the temptation to do so. It's obvious that there is still some feelings of distrust on Zim's part (and rightly so) however he seems to be opening up. I think my favorite part of this chapter was Zim's protectiveness over GIR...very sweet...in a snarky Zim sort of way. And yet he still allowed Dib to borrow him.

I'm loving this.

Ahhh...man, I do so adore this story. Zim is just such an idiot, but in a throughly adorable kind of way. He's obviously upset at himself for not listening to Dib (Mayhaps resentful that Dib dare be right where Zim was wrong) and that he can't function without his pak but rather than let Dibby make it better he just shoves him away.

Reminds me of a guy I dated in high school. lol

ha ha ha i looved this chapter. lmao!!! zimmy dibby goodness in every bite!!! what will zim do next? stay tuned to find out!!!
ha ha ::gleeness!!:: i love this story. you rock person i dont know. you rock my really smelly socks!!!

Wow, 32 chapters already! To be totally honest, a fanfic has to be really good to keep me interested for that long. I'm quite impatient lol But this one still has me on the edge of my seat. You definitally have talent! Great job on keeping them in character. That's really hard to come across since ZADR itself is OOC. But you have it nailed! You didn't put tons of fluff in it or have them just jump into bed all of the sudden. You made it real. And it just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

...I meant Octogon ^^; *sigh* Zim's STILL resisting the delicious human? JUST ADMIT IT, ZIM! YOU LOVE HIM! YOU LOVE HIM GOOD! ;D Hmm, Dib and Gir on a mission...I have to keep reminding myself Gir isn't consistantly idiodic in this fic. It's an odd concept to get used to.

Yeah, too much fluff is a BAD thing...poor Zim and his pak...He seems so depressed-like now. And of COURSE he pushes Dib away when he's only trying to make him feel better...Silly boys...when will they learn? Hopefully soon, but if not, that's okay too. I like angst.

Keep writing! ^_^

BurningSilence

...*is speechless*

This story just found a home in my favorite's list (which is rather short)

I am beyond impressed. The writing style, the characterzation...flawless. Yes, some of the chapters are short but it works well with this story. I especially like how this story is a good blend of dark, erotic, and funny. Usually it's either or, and with this gem the dark aspect is done in such a way as to not sound whingy, the erotic without being corny, and the funny or light aspect without being puke inducing.

Pefrect.

I know this is one of those fics that I'll be checking for updates on a regular basis.

A 'hats off' to your talent.

i feel so special, you deicated that chapter to me. i love this story, i can't wait to find out what happens next, but i know it won't take long since you update like everyday. keep up the good work.

Heh, what's prozac. I'll tell ya what it is, something my brother should be on! *waves* I'm back! And I loved it, as usual. I even loved seeing seven new chapters after only a few days wait, which usually scare me. Unfortunately, I don't seem to be capable of building a proper reveiw, so I'll stick to saying I'm still alive, and I still love it!

... uh... Love,
Kayu

hey dont forget to email me the new chapter at pryanima@comcast.net -i got the one pic for ur dev art about 70 percent done and u should get it tomaroo ^_^ i gtg to work with my mom hope i ttyl -havent seen u lately