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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you don't write more, I will be sad and have to sic the Scary Monkey after you!! Seriously, the fic is great..I thought it'd just weird me out at first, but the story line is great..I also give you props cuz of your accurate representation of Dib's bi-polar..I happen to have the same thing, and most people don't know crap about it..Well, keep up the great work!!
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, this story fucking rocks...I started reading it and I was thinking "god, there is no way i'll read 35 chapters of this" but here I am an hour later, done with all the chapters and craving more. You're a fucking amazing writer. Your story has an amazing and original plot, and some how unknown to god you're able to keep Zim and Dib in perfect character. I'm not a fan of ZADR, but your story has me hooked on it now. Keep up the awesome work! I'll be checking back for future chapters (and maybe a chance to worship at your feet).
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol. Ah, there's Zim's paranioa creeping up again; he just had to 'test' Dib before he'd risk taking him back to the base. Naturally in the most painful way. Though it's logical, if Dib was ever going to turn on Zim it'd be in a situation like that, right? Right.
Beyond that I adore crazy!Dib. 'I'd love for you to kill me'. It was Squee worthy, and the good kind of happy squee not the terrified of my psycho neighbor squee, you know?
Beyond that I adore crazy!Dib. 'I'd love for you to kill me'. It was Squee worthy, and the good kind of happy squee not the terrified of my psycho neighbor squee, you know?
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Held out until the bitter end! And Zim couldn't care less? Dib-unit? Oo; Well, at least now Dib can die happy and without regrets...if Zim lets him! XD And you're welcome for the...trailer? Do my reviews really read like that? Sorry! ^^;
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps* YAY! i can totally see that happening. Oh this made me so happy. I was haveing a cruddy day until now. thank you *hugs*
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, wow. The end to this chapter was quite a shock to me, which usually doesn't happen. In most stories you can see what's gonna be coming a mile away, but you were able to keep me surprised. Very good job with that. It's nice to see that Zim did come through for Dib, although I do suppouse he had to make sure he was loyal enough before he rescued him. Still doing a great job of keeping them in character :)
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeal*
Yay! Another update!
I have to admire your dedication to this fic. It's such a pleasure to wake up in the morning and have a new chapter to read, and even better another one in the eve!
I loved the Zim disguise, I didn't have a clue.
Wonderful job!
Yay! Another update!
I have to admire your dedication to this fic. It's such a pleasure to wake up in the morning and have a new chapter to read, and even better another one in the eve!
I loved the Zim disguise, I didn't have a clue.
Wonderful job!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... shock of a lifetime... jeez, who would have expected THAT? (excepting you of course) ^_^ what a great chappie!!! I can't wait for more smut to happeeeeeeen!!!! XD That's all I've ever wanted in ZADR, SMUT!!! But YOU HAD to get me to like the plot of the thing, damn you!! XD Naw, your story is INCREDIBLE I LOVE it!!!
~Jake
~Jake
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Zim really is an arrogant bastard. Hadn't Dib proved himself ENOUGH already without having to get the 3rd degree too? But I suppose there were cameras watching maybe? Or was Zim just having fun with him? Bastard... Hmm, yup, royally fucked fits Dib's bill quite nicely. Zim's love's gonna kill him. Kill him good! And he'll probably be happy about that too. Oo;
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like the latest chapter. It's an interesting twist, to be sure. I suppose Zim was testing Dib's loyalty... Or just looking for an excuse to beat the shit out of him :O Who knows with that guy...
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!