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by Florville

schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pleased sigh*

I can wait for the raunchy sex..but at least we got some cuddles out of this one!

I completly understand about keeping them in character; obviously that's the most important thing, which you've done brilliantly!

I really admire Dib's 'resilance' as you put it. Popping his shoulder back into place by himself? Ouch! I only hope (once things progress of course) that he uses his resiliance and inner strength later on to his advantage. In other words; right now he's very submisive to Zim, which is fair enough considering the circumstances, but later...well, anyway, he's already shown a glimpse of backbone but when the time is right I'd love to see more of it!

Nicely done.
person Mekare
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you. Don't know you, don't have to. You have an abolutely fantastic mind to come up with this. I never considered even going near a Zim ficcy, but yours is just beautiful. Smexy as hell babe. I have this story bookmarked. And again, thank you!
person pry
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heee as always ur the bestes best write and i m forever ur lovie whore XD
person Insanity
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well there was a nice bit of fluff in that chapter, which was very enjoyable I must admit. It's nice to see the two of them very relaxed around each other instead of an overwelming tension like in most of the chapters. It's an understandable thing with Zim's character, but to have them just to be able to lay there and talk like normal 'people' if you will, is a nice change of pace :)
person raavika
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another new chapter. You're totally welcome for my review, I meant every word of it. By the way, I'm shocked by how fast you update..not that that is a bad thing. Ultra-cute chapter, I love the ZimDib fluff. *bows at your feet*
person Makota
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet. Aww . *grins like an idiot*

When are you going to put some raunchy sex in?

I like raunchy sex, esp. how you write it. *g*

And no worries about the wait, it was worth it!
person Insanity
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, over 2000 hits. This story has become quite the looker, congrats on that. :)

This chapter was very nice, I could almost picture how happy Dib was to be with Zim once again, and Zim being puzzled because of a kiss was a bit funny to me. It will be interesting to see what happens now that they are a full team once again :)
person andalitebandit-6
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering where you'd gone! Figured you just needed a vacation from us or something ;p But anyway, I was caught off guard when Dib started kissing Zim and Zim didn't know what was going on. After all they'd done already it completely skipped my mind that they'd never kissed before...Anyway, welcome back! :D
person GothycCoalChambr
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so Zim was the cop that interogated Dib, ne? good job with that, very good indeed. bi-polar-ness sucks, ne? i was a psychiatric hospital for a month because of it. hell, most of my friends can't put up with me cuz i'm like a freakin yo-yo, lol. lots of lurve for you!
person Yaoifanboy
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! I thought for SURE you were going to put smut in this chappie! ><;

Anyway, great new chapter, as always... I was worried about the delay, because you usually update really quickly I was like... "Oh, NO!!! Did Florville die or somefin'?!" X_X. I would SO miss your ficcy!!

By the way, just out of total random curiosity, are you male or female?

Keep up the good work!!

~Jake