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Well, this is the first time I've reviewed on AFF.net, but I felt this deserved it. GREAT smut scenes, but best of all, it actually has a plot! GaspshockAMAZING! And a very consuming, interesting one at that. There are so few fanfics out there like this one, so running across one is quite the catch. I might add I'm amazed by your dedication; being able to tune into this regularly and know updates will be awaiting me is such a treat. And though it came as a shock to see Dib so spiteful, it was played out and written so well; I do believe you could get the readers to buy just about anything if you continue to write in such a fashion.
As for this chapter... do forgive me for being an obnoxious fangirl for a moment here, but WHOO! BUTT SEX!! And it looks like Zim just might be coming around, too: it's not just angry sex anymore. Which just makes it even better, especially since you took the time to make it as in-character as possible to get to that point. As a side note, I was also highly amused at the fact they did it on a table for some reason. Don't ask me why; I just was.
Anyway, I eagerly await the next chapter. And just to sound cliched: keep up the good work!

Best smut I have read in a long time. You didn't overdo it and was still able to keep it beliveable while it was happening. This doesn't even compare to the other smut chapters you had earlier. Kudos to you :)

*CHEERS OF GLEE*

That was fantastic! Best chapter yet!

Blowing up parts of the world and yummy yummy butt-lovin'. lol :D

Couldn't have been better.

I want to go into more detail, but you've all ready made me late for work! ...was worth it! ;)

Excellent excellent job.

aww i is sooo sorry i havent reviewed.. i was in orlando on vacation.. no internet there. i had to read like 10 freaking chapters when i came back!!! grr!!! you type fast!! well its good. ((everyone loves some dibby zimmy luvin)) i thanks you for the graphic smut ((lol lmao)) you have made my day!! **yay you!!** oh and leave my socks out of this!!

Aw, crud, I missed catching the last chapter! >< Hooray for smutty goodness! ;D It caught me by surprise to find out Zim had morals Oo; Who'd've thought? Reminds me of Nny, sort of, in that he has no problems with cold blooded murder, yet taking someone against their will is appaling to them.

BEST. CHAPTER. EVER.

Seriously. I had a feeling it was gonna be good since it was named after one of my favorite ZADR pic's. :D Bonnieslashfiend's a great artist. This chapter's definitally my favorite so far. And not just for the sex (thought it was a major plus XD Whoot for smut!) I got butterflies in my stomach when reading it. I just.. don't really know what to say. I'm so impressed I'm really speechless. I know you've heard this from everybody, but you're an amazing writer. You can make the characters do things they wouldn't really do and keep them in perfect character. You can get emotion out of your readers. Not alot of people can do that. I'd put this story on my favorites if I had an account here. I'll probably put a link to it in my livejournal next time I update. I just love it so much!

Keep up the great work, and congrats on over 2,000 hits! You deserve it!!

Random fact: around a week ago I saw that pic, and the first thing I thought was 'Wow. If it weren't for the date, I'd swear they drew this for Vindication.' so I think it's great that you got to see it too. Now moving onto the general love for your chapter, plus (and I can't beleive I'm actually writing this...) I want to thank you immensely for the smutty goodness. ^_^ I think it's going to be listed as one of my "reference" scenes for some of my lemons. *drool* I really did love this chapter.
Yours truly,
Kayu

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay. *rubs hands together* They finally consummated! I think you made it quite believable. Great job. And I haven't mentioned that I am definitely enjoying the longer chapters, so thanks for that!

Dib no longer has his scythe hair? That makes me sad :O

Man, another update..I'm still amazed by how quick you get chapters out. Your story is quite addictive though. Good job (of course)!

eeehh heeheehee, antennae fluff!!

so cute!!!!

i likes this, but the chaps are kinda short.... but oh well..