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by Florville

person Sylver
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY DESTRUCTION!!! ^_^
person Switch
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Im sorry to hear about your job. my dad has union problems too. people can be assholes. but hey im here as much as i can be. *huggles*
person BeeBop
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about the job. But, the chapter was nice! And so was the Art work. It was very good.
person littleshipper
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really sorry to hear about your job. :-\ That really sucks. They'll get theres tho, karma comes back around. I don't know the details of why you were fired, but whatever it was try not to let it get you down too much. I'm sorry it wasn't fair.

But anyway, this chapter was short but I liked it. Hmm... Tallest Zim. I like it :) Keep up the great work! You have such awesome ideas
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll certainly check out your artwork.

My sympathies about the job. I only hope you can find another quickly (that you enjoy). I know what it's like to be struggling...tis much suckage.

So Zim going up against the Tallest? I wondered if you were going to go down that route. I've seen it in fics before but never with the use of human slaves. Kudos for creativity.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter and I hope things turn around for you. :)
person BurningSilence
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off, I'm sorry to hear you were fired. That's awful! I hope you feel better though...You'll find a new job, I'm sure. *hugs*

Now, as for your chapter:

So sweet! And Tallest Zim...it *does* have a nice ring to it...lol

Well, like I said, feel better!

Love and Light,

BurningSilence
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chappie
person Switch
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOO DO THAT AGIAN! lol Seriously though awsome chapter. sorry I was away for a while my job takes me to odd places and sometimes I can't take the laptop with me. *sigh*nessecerry sacrifice I suppose but not a welcome one. nice job.
person Bee Bop
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, YAY!! I luurve the chapter!! Whhhooooot!! Update very soon!!
person BurningSilence
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm back today, and what a nice chapter to come home to! And I've seen the picture 'Watch the World Die', and you're right, it is VERY inspiring, one of my favourites! Another wonderful chapter, and *very* sexy! Ohh, so much love!

Hope you're doing good!

BurningSilence