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by Florville

person KRimzon
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! That is what this chapter made me say. Man, those legs have always been my favorite thing about Zim, but now *tear of joy*...

Glad you like my artwork! It's a fairly new account, and I don't have a decent scanner, but when I do, I'll be sure to put up a pic dedicated to this fic!
person [pry
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good i think u acutally got EVEN BETTE!! u seem more comfortable with writing and mabey writing them a bit longer lately? i dunno but ur improvmetn has defiantly made reading ur stories even better ^_^ havent see u lately so....miss u! hope things are getting better ^_^
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot! That was kinky and steamy! My fav combination!


*purrrrrrrrrrrrrr*


*wipes drool from chin* ahem, anyway. Can't wait to see them take down the massive. Am also curious as to what Dib is going to do for a disguise.

Loverly chapter.
person BurningSilence
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...^_^

I'm glad Zim decided to have Dib come with him aboard the Massive. I'm kind of sad for Red and Purple, though...Oh well, it has to happen. They're like two big kids, who just happen to be mean...

And I hope things are going well for you with your job. I'm sure things will work out, somehow.

Much love!

Burning Silence
person Insanity
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Take all the time you need, you're having a rough time so you deserve a writer's break :)

Sex seems to be a good place to go if you have writers block, it doesn't hurt the story at all and helps a bit with character development considering they have bumps to get over with that anyway. You're doing great *hugs*
person Krimzon
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I just read this entire thing in one go. I love it. So much love.

I am sad, though. I am writing a fic and I had some ideas that are already in this story. Gah, I'm still gonna write it. I'll just...yeah. Hey, would you read it if I post it? Oop, shameless plug. Ah, well. What can ya do.

Righ then, back to the actual reveiw... I may just have to read this again, it's just that damn cool.
person Switch
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! updates! I loved this chapter! i want a ZIM!
person Insanity
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes, the unanswered question of what will happen to Dib after all is said and done. I've been wondering myself throughout a small portion of the stories points. It's nice that you finally brought it up and had Zim speak on it a bit. I missed this story while you were drawing that amazing picture :)
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Irken precious metal is copper? ...well, tnhere's no accounting for alien tastes I guess. I mean, they wear pink with green skin! That's just plain *wrong*. And, ooh, another chapter! Go kick Tallest ass, Zim-baby! Woo! But don't kill them, 'cause they're such a cute couple! *^_^* And, yeah, Zim go make green babies with Dib, yeah!
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, greed is always fun to take advantage of.

It seems there is a lot left up in the air between Zim and Dib. Are we to expect a lover's row comming up soon? grr...you have me on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to see what your devious mind can produce!

Oh, and I'm just about to check out your sketch now. Sounds like you really put some effort into it.

Looking forward to more.