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by Florville

person Insanity
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You won't hear this from me often, but dare I say that was hot. *grins* It's nice to see a story in here, but the way you describe the smut is just pure fabulous, love every bit of it.
person Tamago
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chappy, as always! I done gone and giggled, teeheehee. XD (Ignore the 'done gone and' part, k?)
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...*Droooooooooool*

Yes, yet another chapter that will need to be re-read multiple times. That was fantastic!

The chapters keep getting better and better. The imagry with this one was very...potent. hee.

Can't wait for more.
person sylver
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked this chap (as i have liked the whole fic so nothing overly new there)

i dont know if i answered your question, so just bear with me if i accidentlay answer it again.

when i mean when i said that zim was goin softwas that he seems to be acing a lot warmer towards dib, which i think is sweet, its good character development.
what zim did for dib in this chapter is incredibly romantic. call me a sap (or whatever) but can there be hapes more fluff in the next chapters? ooh! and pointless destruction is good as well! (yes i know im odd.)
person Makota
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I think that was one of the better chappies yet...and there wasn't even any sex. Now that's something!!

I absoultly loved...everything. I had to re-read it, it was so good.

I liked the computer's "wait, am I supposed to answer you?"...that was quite good. And Zim's emotions were spot on.

Dib curled up with Gir was just cute.

The roses were very sweet. In any other fic it would have been puke inducing, but it just seemed to fit.

I think I'm going to read it again.
person Bee Bop
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh such a good update. For my mom's birthday one year, he didn't buy her tons of roses or anything, but one single rose made of 24k gold. Oh it was so romantic! :) Great job on the latest chapters.
person Yaoifanboy
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! How sweet of Zim! I likies this chapter, a LOT!! But yeah, a good one! I can just imagine how Dib feels *dreamy eyes*

On another completely random note: GAH!!! I WANT YOUR TATTOO!!!
person Insanity
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this chapter was very sweet and touching. It's nice to see the action of the story placed to the side for a few moments for stuff like this. Even though Zim can't say a few words I think the actions spoke louder :)
person Goat
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First and foremost--Awwwwwww. And maybe that seems like an excess of w's, but really, I could have dragged it out to insane amounts without feeling the "aw" was nearly long enough to fit my reaction. This chapter is such wonderful relief from the anguish and general misery of the last (not to say I didn't enjoy that just as much, because I did), and it's done so very sweetly too, while sticking to the personalities set up and developed throughout the tale. I found it perfect--and touching, at least the first part--that Zim would do something like that, yet be unable to express it verbally. And, though this is out of order, that spotting the rose put in water, tended and cared for, was enough in itself to drain him of his anger. There was so much about this I loved, and so much that brought me to squeals, as silly and fangirl-ish that sounds. And while I do enjoy my smut, it's so nice to see real CARE between them--and so very well expressed and written, at that.
person Bloodbabe2003
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.0 oh holy cow this story rocks!! I don't care if Jhonen wants to flay me alive, I need to see if Zim becomes a Tallest!...please keep writing?? *Offers up a cookie* please?